FILLED: Six Hours (1/2)shangriladaOctober 8 2011, 21:30:05 UTC
Okay, this is my first time EVER writing Supernatural, so I apologize profusely for...all of it, and I hope someone else comes along and fills it...less horribly. Okay. *blushes* *BLUSHES MORE
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Re: FILLED: Six Hours (1/2)shangriladaOctober 8 2011, 21:32:58 UTC
"Sam Winchester, you don't put that head down right now, you're going to get chained to that stretcher for a week."
"Dean's leg..."
"Down."Sam snaps down as if on cue, and Bobby's relieved for about five seconds before he sees the seizing, which is about a half second before Dean's hollering "SAM!" like someone's trying to separate the damn two, when really there's two feet of floor between them, and Dean's rapidly closing that with his crabwalking and wincing and single-minded dedication to getting as close to his brother as possible, which backfires majorly when he takes one of Sam's elbows to the face
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Re: FILLED: Six Hours (1/2)tahirireOctober 9 2011, 00:03:38 UTC
This was your first Supernatural fic!? This is fantastic! I love how it is all feasible things that could have/probably DID happen, and not really made up things that someone wanted to see that clearly didn't happen, if that makes sense. Bobby's narrative is perfect, lol. And SAM, lol, oh baby, EVERYONE'S Spanish is better than yours. ♥_♥
Re: FILLED: Six Hours (1/2)shangriladaOctober 9 2011, 00:05:17 UTC
oh wow! thank you!!!
Yep, my first, though I've read so many at this point that I was reaaaally hoping their voices were in my head clearly enough to make it work. And starting from Bobby's POV sounded less scary then jumping head-first into one of the boys', you know?
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"Dean's leg..."
"Down."Sam snaps down as if on cue, and Bobby's relieved for about five seconds before he sees the seizing, which is about a half second before Dean's hollering "SAM!" like someone's trying to separate the damn two, when really there's two feet of floor between them, and Dean's rapidly closing that with his crabwalking and wincing and single-minded dedication to getting as close to his brother as possible, which backfires majorly when he takes one of Sam's elbows to the face ( ... )
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Yep, my first, though I've read so many at this point that I was reaaaally hoping their voices were in my head clearly enough to make it work. And starting from Bobby's POV sounded less scary then jumping head-first into one of the boys', you know?
and yeah, Sam's Spanish, I can't even.
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