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Oct 08, 2011 13:30

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7.03 comment-fic meme, comment-fic is eating my brain

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FILLED 1/2 mentholpixie October 9 2011, 05:50:14 UTC
I SHOULD NOT BE FILLING PROMPTS! I HAVE OTHER THINGS TO WORK ON, BUT ( ... )

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FILLED 2/2 mentholpixie October 9 2011, 05:51:34 UTC
The first few decades he thinks he's happy that Lucifer doesn't want him as a demon, that the devil doesn't want him any other way than as he is - human so he can break him and make him bleed and scream for Dean and Lucifer can laugh and never let him go - but the endlessness of living as Lucifer's (pet, slave, bunk buddy, play thing) captive eventually makes him wish that Lucifer would offer him the same deal that Alistair offered Dean (and he will never ever tell Dean this). The fallen angel is delighted when he figures it out, makes Sam beg and plead and bargain, offer anything and everything, and one time, one time, Lucifer gives in ( ... )

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Re: FILLED 2/2 shangrilada October 9 2011, 09:16:09 UTC
Sammyyyyyyy.

Great job.

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Re: FILLED 2/2 nwhepcat October 9 2011, 13:32:52 UTC
Oh holy cats, that is an amazing story. Poor poor Sammy.

(And his attempt to become a demon -- aaaggghhhh!!)

Awesome story.

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Re: FILLED 2/2 mentholpixie October 9 2011, 18:09:48 UTC
Thanks :)

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Re: FILLED 2/2 rokhal October 9 2011, 19:50:03 UTC
"Sam obeys. It's reflexive." GAAAAAAHHH!!!!

"Sam likes being ash more than he likes anything." AAAAAAAIIGH!!!

"But you pulled the trigger, kiddo." NAAAAAAGH MOTHER@#&%$GOD@#$#%&TARD!!!!!!

Your Lucifer is really, really horrifying. The sense of humor makes it worse.

Um, nice work.

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Re: FILLED 2/2 mentholpixie October 9 2011, 20:02:57 UTC
:D Thank you! I whipped this up really quick, seeing as I really shouldn't be distracting myself with prompts anyway. I just couldn't resist

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Re: FILLED 2/2 quickreaver October 10 2011, 00:00:54 UTC
Man, you really got the torture down without having to spell it out in minute detail. And it feels perfectly canon. Perfection. Sammy, Sammy, Sammy...

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Re: FILLED 2/2 mentholpixie October 10 2011, 03:49:50 UTC
XD Thank you!

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Re: FILLED 2/2 crazybeagle October 10 2011, 03:48:45 UTC
Oh my...
First off I love you for taking the prompt, second off I'm kind of horrified at myself because I didn't realize what such a thoroughly successful fill of this prompt would mean.
That's horrifying. (And awesome for that reason but...dang.)
The most effective parts:
"Waits the whole five seconds it takes for Sam to turn away from Adam and let Lucifer get back to work." There's no words for that. And it was pretty freaking beautiful that Sam couldn't bring himself to do it, considering what he'd been through.
But you pulled the trigger, kiddo.” ...Which would be the single scariest thing for him to hear at that moment.
I love you forever for this fill.

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Re: FILLED 2/2 mentholpixie October 10 2011, 04:58:58 UTC
Your prompt just DEMANDED a fill, so I put aside There's No Such Thing As Monsters and bashed this out.
XD I'm VERY glad that you like it!

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Re: FILLED 2/2 crazybeagle October 10 2011, 05:01:03 UTC
You know, hilariously enough, reading your latest chapter of TNSTAM was next on my agenda the second I finished Threw Stones, so I was literally just about to do that like right now....
;)
I wouldn't call this bashing it out, either...this is brilliance. :D :D

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Re: FILLED 2/2 debbiel66 October 17 2011, 01:51:02 UTC
Sam inhaling demon smoke is such a visceral thing to imagine. The last line is a killer. Thank you for filling this prompt!

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Re: FILLED 2/2 mentholpixie October 17 2011, 04:24:44 UTC
Thank you for commenting!!! =D

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