Romancing the Pain - Part 23

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: MA-15 (lots of violence and swearing)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: Howdy y’all! My muse called a truce. For now. So look! A new chapter so soon! *pats

Comments

[booglebee]

Kekse wanted a cliffhanger? He wanted a freaking cliffhanger! Noooooooo.
Ah..what can I do. Nothing. I just have to accept it.
But actually the cliffy doesn't bother me because Pepa saw Silvia, YAY!! So close...and yet..eh whats gonna happen now?!
But still they were that close so YAY!!

And also another YAY!! for updating so FAST!
Nice descriptive action in there too! Loved it. The whole thing.

[raven_bard]

*chuckles* Actually he was complaining about the cliffhangers and I was feeling evil so I twisted his words a bit. That and I like to keep y'all on your toes. *grins*

Yes reunion is so close...can you smell it? So close...yet so far. I honestly have no idea where I'm going with that cliffhanger sooo it can either be good or bad.

Well I'm glad you liked the fast update. It might have to keep cuz I have no clues or hints on what the next chapter's gonna be about. And whew! You just took a load off my shoulders about enjoying the action bits; I'm no good at writing action per se. It's not my area of expertise so thank you for thinking it was good. :-)

[raven_bard]

*grins* Relax Heaven. I doubt my muse and brain are evil enough to put the redhead six feet under. Besides, she's not done kicking ass and taking names. I love writing Warrior_Silvia...it's not something we saw a lot of in the show. And now we'll never get a chance to so we'll have to settle for using our imaginations and reading it in stories.

Thanks for reading and commenting btw. :-)

[lenageek]

Oooohhh, you know how to twist the knife so welllll!!! Aaarrgghh! [Sorry, I'm yelling again!] So close, yet so far! I do like the Warrior Silvia tho - very kick ass!

You had my hand at my mouth when I read that Silvia got nicked, so you can imagine how worked up I was at the end of the chapter (and having my mom interrupt me just as I was reading it - I wanted to scream!) - ahh, you are the master of suspense! Just, please, don't let either of our girls go six feet under! Eep! I hear ya about the action bits - they are damn hard to write. But you do a better job than I do! ;D

[raven_bard]

*covers ears* Whoa, whoa, there tiger! *slowly uncovers one ear..hears silence and uncovers the other* Jesus, Mary and Elvis...it sounded like my own mama screaming at me for doing something wrong!

How awesome is Warrior Silvia? I really wished we saw her in badass mode more often in the show. Master of suspense huh? Sweet! I take that as one awesome compliment...I'm starting to get a kick outta these cliffies. *chuckles* And I can assure you nobody is buying the farm...nobody on the good side anyway. They might be banged up and bruised but they will triumph! *cue in victory music*

Thanks for reading and commenting. And your action scenes are just fine *winks*

[lenageek]

Whoops, sorry, I'm such a screamer! Tho what does that say about me? Heh heh..

I always liked seeing Silvia pulling a gun - something about hot women and guns or women in uniform - always gets my juices flowing! ;D Whew, thanks for the reassurance that none of the good guys are buying the farm - banged and bruised up I can deal with and you've sure given Pepa her share this time around!

Yeah, I'm working on my action sequence right this instance. The next chaper of mine's gonna be long and full of action - do you think folks will mind a long entry? [shrugs]

[raven_bard]

No please! Long entries rule!!! *bounces happily* Is it up? Will it be in 5 minutes? Please? Ooh I'm soo excited! *pops open a Jack and Coke bottle and reclines back in chair* I'm sooo ready....bring it on!

And yes...Silvia with a gun...Pepa with a gun...hell any woman with a gun. *shakes head* I need therapy. *grins*

[slayergirl13]

ok well this just keeps getting better and better. I think I might have a problem, I'm starting to not mind the cliffhangers so much. I don't know what's wrong with me.

I loved the fiesty, redhead, ass whoopin', hot self that Silvia was, so great! This chapter was wonderful, I can't wait for the next and I second lenageek's request to not send either of the beauties six feet under, please.

[raven_bard]

*smiles* I'm breaking down that taboo barrier that surrounds cliffhangers. Sweet!

Ain't kickass Silvia gorgeous? *sighs* And I'm not THAT cruel. No six feet under action for the white hats. Can't say the same for the mafia crew. In my personal opinion I say KILL EM ALL! *grins*

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

[raven_bard]

*pulls you back up* Hey, I'm not a big scary ogre. I know RL can be a bitch. Hell my RL is like some demanding all encompassing mistress that keeps riding my ass...and whilst that would normally sound pleasurable, its not. *pulls face* Demanding little shit...throwing uni assignments and whatnot at me.

But holy wow you re-read?! *hands you a cookie* And the way you summed up the beginning, middle and now the near end. You were totally spot on!! *claps* I bet you're exhausted reading such an angst filled story now huh? Go have a good long rest.

And yes, Silvia's gotta keep up with her wife..plus with Pepa being gone so long and then kidnapped, she most probably needed a way to vent.

No worries about reading the updates when they're posted...they're not going anywhere so take your time.

Thanks for reading and commenting btw. I'm glad you're enjoying the ride. *grins*