Romancing the Pain - Part 25

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: NC-17 (for those of you thinking there’s smut, there isn’t. Instead, you get a boatload of very graphically written gore so uh, if you think you’re gonna toss your cookies, skim read ok?)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the

Comments

[qosmio18]

Wow Raven. That was wild. It was great. Wow. I couldn't detached myself from this fic. So detailed as if I were there.

Silvia..... (Note to self don't mess with her wife or if possible stop anyone who thinks about messing with Pepa) I was like she stabbed him in the eye, she stabbed him the shoulder, she's kicking him, she broke his nose.... Hell yeah El Gordo "no mas." Wow if Pepa didn't shot, Silvia would've chopped up his balls. :p

Congrats on almost completing this awesome fic. You rock.

[raven_bard]

*nods* Silvia definitely went apeshit on El Gordo's ass. But it's in her nature to be so damn guilty about it after. Pepa shot him cuz she knew Silvia would be guilty over it...always looking out for her girl.

"So detailed as if I were there" ~ Thank you! It was another hard chapter to write...I'm glad you thought that. *smiles*

I'm half glad this fic is almost over...I can't believe there's 25 chapters to it! I was like "whoa!"

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

[extessie]

I don't have words.

But this?
This is GOOOD.

Wow.

[raven_bard]

*chuckles* Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

[lenageek]

Holy frakking hell, that was intense, great, stupendous, and everything else that I can't think of!!! Poor thing, no wonder you're worn out after finishing this and reading mine

[raven_bard]

I was...really I was. I collapsed into bed after commenting on your update. It was exhausting!

Lol..it's ok to be girly. It's not like anybody was watching you. *chuckles* But yeah...Silvia realizing what she'd done. I found that part to be crucial cuz Silvia's not some crazed bloodlust addict. It's just not her. So she would naturally react like that after torturing someone.

Hehe...well safe to say I've officially stopped beating up the gals. It's all yours now, honey. *chuckles* And forever? Oh gods, no. Forever is a long time. All things must come to a close.

My uni assignments are kicking my ass so hard I can barely sit down without wincing. But I'll get there. Somehow.

Thanks for being such a huge supporter of this story, btw! I'm really grateful! *hugs back*

[lenageek]

Hehe...well safe to say I've officially stopped beating up the gals. It's all yours now, honey.

Whew! But now it's on me?! Okay, maybe I'm not so relieved now! Eep!

And naw, I won't make ya write forever. But I will throw pillows at you to cushion your sore butt! Ah, I remember the days of uni! They seem so looong ago!

Thanks for being such a huge supporter of this story, btw! I'm really grateful! *hugs back*

Siempre! It's easy to be a huge supporter when there's such great writing behind it! Hugs, hugs, hugs!

[mmm_kekse]

omg omg omg!!! you stabbed him in the eye! and like twisted the freaking eye out .. I mean.. Silvia did but...you know xD omg it was so awesome!! it was so gory and detailed and omg violence shouldn't make me this happy but I had such a huge ass grin on my face and this whole chapter made me so damn happy *laughs* Silvia going berserk was so great and then it went from being so awesomely violent to being awesomely emotional and everything was so fantastic and I'm still way to excited about this chapter I can't really get my thoughts straight but omg it was so awesome! even tho I'm a little sad this story will end soon. but omg I love you for updating so soon and writing so awesomely and gory and awesomely!! xD ♥ you so absolutely rock!! can't wait to see how this story will end *jumps up and down* thank you so much for writing this awesome awesome fic and chapter!! :D

[raven_bard]

*chuckles* I just knew you'd like the eye scene. I knew! *laughs* I took a note outta Hostel...you know, the eyegasm scene and improvised...Silvia style.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so! I was so tired when I finished writing it. So many raw emotions...I dropped straight into bed after.

Thank YOU for reading and commenting so diligently! I'm really honored that you like this story and leave such fantastic comments. You so totally rock too!

But the last chapter will have to wait til next week. Got a major essay to do.

[mmm_kekse]

I didn't just like the scene I'm in love with that scene. I want to marry that scene LOL I have to admit though I never watched Hostel. just Hotel 2 and that was quite some time ago. Eli Roth is so sick *laughs* (and I was so shocked when I realized he played the Bear Jew in Besterds xD) I just remember watching the first 10 minutes of Hostel and it was all about naked girls and so I stopped watching and damn saying it like that sounds like the stupidest reason ever to stop watching a movie *chuckles* but I so have to watch it now just to see what that eyegasm scene is all about xD

[raven_bard]

Eli Roth has a brilliantly twisted mind. Him as the Bear Jew was appropriate. He has that slow, sly smile that's just sooo evil looking! And that look in his eyes before he kills the Nazi...it's pure unadulterated pleasure! *grins* That said, how is it you've never seen Hostel 1? The second was shit. The first was brilliant. The eyegasm scene alone was worth it. Find the unrated version...it's so much more fun. Lol.

I was half tempted to end the story with this chapter but I thought I'd give y'all some closure.

Thanks for the luck...I'll definitely need it. It's getting insane. But I had a stroke of luck; one of my professors decided to give us all a 2 week extension for the major essay so yay! I hope your RL is killing you too much btw...life can really suck sometimes.

[raven_bard]

I'm an avid fan of horror movies. I totally kinda stole that eye thing from Hostel...it's not as awesomely done as Hostel...Silvia did not have a blowtorch at hand but I improvised. *grins*

Yup, yup. El Gordy is six feet under. Closure for all! Kinda. Lol.

Thanks for reading and leaving comments. :-)