Romancing the Pain - Part 25

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: NC-17 (for those of you thinking there’s smut, there isn’t. Instead, you get a boatload of very graphically written gore so uh, if you think you’re gonna toss your cookies, skim read ok?)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the

Comments

[kiarcheo]

I can't believe it's the second last..how will I do without your fic? *pouts*

I'll admit I skipped some lines, just the detailed descriptions ones but...ehi, tomorrow I've lessons at 8 am, and I need my beauty sleep!
I'm a little sad that both times they try to touch each other they flinch because of physical or emotional pain...it will be a long way for them to get over this experience...I only hope they will do it together, this time!
Great chapter, as always

I can't wait for the final chapter, but at the same time I don't want the fic to end...I feel a bit bipolar, right now...but I understand your need for relax, you deserve it (but maybe, when you'll be fresh you could write something else, right?give me at least the hope...)

thank you, raven, you are fantastic *hugs*

[raven_bard]

You'll do just fine, don't pout. *hands you a cookie* There are tons of awesome PepSi fics out there. Mine will be long forgotten soon.

Lessons at EIGHT?! In the morning?!?! *flinch* What kinda crazy uni schedules 8am classes?! Ouch!

I have started another fic...I posted it up as a sneak preview a few weeks back. I forgot you were away. If you're interested here's the link: http://raven-bard.livejournal.com/11729.html

Thanks for being such a dedicated follower of this story, Kia! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave comments. *hug back*

[kiarcheo]

"What kinda crazy uni schedules 8am classes?!"

Apparently mine! *crosses arms and pouts*

Forget this fic??No way!If not for all the angst you made us go through *grins*

Interested??Very interested! *nods furiously* I was ready to wait some time before reading again from you, so...fantastic!

Now I just want to read the final chapter!

[raven_bard]

Hmm...that blows. Maybe it has something to do with what department you're in. I'm in Arts and Social Sciences....our earliest lectures/classes are 9am and even that's rare. Maybe they understand that we Arts people are not morning individuals. *chuckles*

[selinakris]

As much as I moaned about the angst level of this story I can't believe it's nearly over *sniffs*
But wow!! what a chapter it was goretastic, I just loved kick ass Silvia, though she can go back in her box now, to much of a good thing and all.
Think I prefer soft gentle Silvia, one Rambo in the family is enough and it's definately Pepa's mantle.
Can't wait to see how it ends. *bounces up and down in anticipation*

[raven_bard]

*hands you a kleenex* I'm sorry. For both the high level of angst and wrapping the story up. But everything must come to an end.

Goretastic? Awesome word! Silvia's not meant to be all Rambo; it's not in her nature. That's why I wrote her having a delayed reaction and being completely horrified.

The ending will have to wait til next week..I'm super busy. But thank you for following the story and putting up with all the crazy angst. *smiles*

[lenageek]

It is wrong that I was imagining Alex Pina as El Gordo when Silvia was torturing him and the voice of the PepSi community as Silvia was describing the torture that he put Pepa through?

No, it can't be wrong since it's so funny! I'm dying at my desk laughing here! :D

[lenageek]

LOL, okay I won't die laughing yet - I'll just roll around on the floor in giggles!

[lovelyafterglow]

Holy shit...that was bad ass! I don't know why Silvia was feeling all bad about what she'd done...she should've continued to kick his corpse after all the shit he'd put everyone, especially Silvia and Pepa, through!! :-P

I'm both excited to see how this story is going to end, and sad that it's going to be over. You have one hell of a story here, raven...a fanfic that will surely go down as a PepSi Classic.

[raven_bard]

"I don't know why Silvia was feeling all bad about what she'd done" ~ It's not in her nature. She was just overcome with rage and revenge. And it also shows that she's fundamentally different from El Gordo and all the torturers; she has a conscience.

A PepSi Classic? *blush* Thanks so much! Yeah...I need to wrap this up..I'm totally swamped with assignments.

But thank you for following the story...it's greatly appreciated.

[lovelyafterglow]

Oooh, I know, I know...still think she should've kept kicking him though. Maybe it's me who doesn't have a conscience, haha. :-D

[slayergirl13]

ok, that was wonderful, scary but wonderful. So true the actions of the lovely pelirroja, hurting a loved one cane bring out the beast, but when the carnage is over the beauty has to deal with the results.

It was so much fun to read, I'm not sure what that says about me that I enjoyed all the gross detail, oh and the knife in the eye and dangley bits, nice touch ;) As always excellent writing.

Ok you've piqued my interest more than usual for the next update, I'm intrigued to see how it all comes together and complete in one chapter. I don't know why but I'm hoping it's not gonna be a jump forward one ie: '4 months later...' eh I don't feel like an ending like that would give such a superb story justice. But who am I but a mere reader, so may the stupendous author give us thine ending soon? Please?

[raven_bard]

Yeah....rage clouds over everything. It's a scary emotion. The withdrawal after is not so fun either. But such is life.

Liked the eye bit did ya? I flashed back to Hostel and the eyegasm scene and I totally had to put it in. Not that grotesque but still...

You did hit the nail on the wall bout that jumping time thing...I know it's not the greatest way to end but I'm really busy and it's the only way I can think of to wrap this up quickly. But it's a time jump with flashbacks...y'know like reminiscing scenes.

But uh...you're gonna have to wait til next week. I have one major essay to do. I'm shocked I managed to get back home at 7:30pm today. *rolls eyes*

Thanks for reading and commenting.