Come Back to Me - Part 6

Jul 21, 2009 00:29


Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: PG-13 (for now)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

A/N: Hi guys. Sorry, this one's a little long. I tried to cut it down, but then it didn't make sense so I gave up. Comments, critiques and rotten tomatoes are all welcome. (Keep the tomato throwing to a minimum though, por favor. I ( Read more... )

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mmm_kekse July 20 2009, 19:27:32 UTC
this cheered me up so much <3 xD oh Pepa! lol
thank you that you keep writing <3 and thank you that this part was so long xD I would only throw your favorite things at you for that (so if you love rotten tomatoes I would totally throw them xD)
and I really like the idea that Pepa tried to run away again... especially since she was so sure Silvia was getting better. so interesting she was scared of that. those two have a very interesting talent in making themselves miserable at times. oh I think my tired mind is talking nonsense again. ignore me.

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raven_bard July 21 2009, 00:36:55 UTC
Eh I'm not a fan of vegetables. The endless fights my mama had trying to feed my greens to me. *snickers* Yes this is why we love these two. They totally know how to make each other (and themselves) miserable to the core, ironically through thinking about each other. *shakes head* Thanks for reading and commenting.

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pepsi_0623 July 20 2009, 19:34:38 UTC
Thank you so much. I couldn't stop laughing. Please continue.

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raven_bard July 21 2009, 00:37:53 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad I was able to make you laugh. I had to incorporate a little humor after piling up so much angst. And what could be better than Pepa getting scolded like a child whilst standing in a fountain? Rofl!

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lenageek July 20 2009, 21:00:08 UTC
No tomatoes thrown here, that was awesome! Hee, that must have been one BIG fountain for Pepa to land in! What a great way to break the tension and to have everyone have a laugh again during such tense moments. I can totally see DL chewing Pepa out! ;D Oh, and no part is too long so keep writing! Love it!

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raven_bard July 21 2009, 00:39:29 UTC
*chuckles* Maybe the hospital decided to invest in a nice big fountain after some seer told them that in the near future a very tall, dark and gorgeous cop would fall into it. Thank you for continuing to read.

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junebuggy01 July 20 2009, 21:02:30 UTC
I love your story so much. It's cute and funny and just... so good! Sorry I can't be funny like you in my comments.

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raven_bard July 21 2009, 00:40:13 UTC
Lol. All comments are appreciated. I'm just glad you're continuing to read. :-)

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runetraverse July 20 2009, 21:10:49 UTC
*giggle, snerk* OMG! The image of Pepa falling into the fountain will stay with me for the rest of the day - that was totally priceless! Oh, and DL chewing Pepa out, threatening to put her across his knee? That was utterly made of awesome right there. Loving this fic so very much, thanks for posting it!

(and I SO need to get my PepSi icons up.)

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raven_bard July 21 2009, 00:41:21 UTC
More PepSi icons? *shrieks with joy* Please do. I can't wait! Glad I got a chuckle outta you. Humor is needed in times like this. Thank you for liking my fic and reading it! :-D

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