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Come Back to Me - Part 6

Jul 21, 2009 00:29

Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: PG-13 (for now)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

A/N: Hi guys. Sorry, this one's a little long. I tried to cut it down, but then it didn't make sense so I gave up. Comments, critiques and rotten tomatoes are all welcome. (Keep the tomato throwing to a minimum though, por favor. I ( Read more... )

fanfiction, come back to me, pepa/silvia

Comments 38

elisa_trapt July 21 2009, 02:29:26 UTC

Another fine chapter, raven! DL laying into Pepa is great - I can totally see it! And I love that her rather sodden appearance makes Silvia laugh...a good sign she's on the mend??

raven_bard July 21 2009, 02:33:01 UTC

*blush* Thank you. Yes, Silvia's gonna start to perk up from now on...I think. My mind can get quite manipulative on me sometimes. I say black, it says polka dots and pink. But yes, as they say, laughter is the best medicine. Wow you went through the chapters fast! I'm glad ur enjoying the story so far. :-)

elisa_trapt July 21 2009, 10:58:30 UTC

LOL, I tend to become a bit...obsessive when I find a fic I like - can't put it down! I DO at least recognize it's not entirely healthy, but...*shrugs* what can you do? :)

And, hey, polka dots aren't a bad thing. A romantic at heart, I am perversely a sucker for major angst as well. So if Silvia takes a turn for the worse again, well, I won't hold it against you. As long as she makes it back to her beloved eventually, of course. :)

raven_bard July 21 2009, 13:27:46 UTC

I understand totally. I got horribly addicted to some of the Xena Uber fiction on the royalacademyofbards.org website. And it was bad just how I would NEED to read something from that site everyday. *shakes head* Sometimes looking back I wonder how the hell I managed to complete high school with all these online distractions.

As for the angst...I'm a sucker for angst too. In fact I tend to write angst better...guess maybe I'm just not such a funny person. Well we'll see where my mind goes with the story. It dictates see, I simply type. ;-)

sia_9 July 21 2009, 03:01:29 UTC

great job! i wish silvia really lived...sigh

raven_bard July 21 2009, 06:30:23 UTC

Ditto that. But in my mind, reading all the post wedding fan fiction, I can almost make my brain believe that Silvia's ok. ;-) Thanks for reading!

yul1vk July 21 2009, 06:58:25 UTC

wow i love your story :) awwwwwww poor pepa every one kept making fun of her :(

raven_bard July 21 2009, 09:11:24 UTC

Lol. But at least she got Silvia laughing. Thank you for taking the time to read. :-)

mmm_kekse July 21 2009, 18:39:12 UTC

okay then no tomatoes for you! xD *throws some country music instead*

those two are... they're something lol... and thank god their talent for making each other happy is even bigger <3

mmm_kekse July 21 2009, 18:43:23 UTC

oh great now I'm even too stupid to actually hit the "reply"-button :( lol

raven_bard July 22 2009, 03:01:11 UTC

*giggles* It's ok. You managed in the end. ;-)

lovelyafterglow July 21 2009, 19:08:21 UTC

Great update. And don't apologize for it being long!! It could be novel length and I'd just sit here and read right through it in one go...and then I'd probably still want more!

raven_bard July 22 2009, 03:02:47 UTC

N-novel length? *gulp* Your words are beyond flattering but I don't think I'm up to writing a novel length fic. Though this might just turn out to a be a bit of a lengthy fic since I have a buncha ideas written down for it. We'll see how it goes. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to write a comment. :-D