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raven_bard

Come Back to Me - Part 7.2

Jul 22, 2009 22:36

Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: PG-13 (for now)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

COME BACK TO ME - Part 7.2

“I can’t Pepa!” Silvia cried out, staring at the water fearfully. It loomed in front of her like an ominous gaping hole, waiting to suck her in and drown her. Silvia bit her lip, tears threatening to fill ( Read more... )

fanfiction, come back to me, pepa/silvia

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junebuggy01 July 22 2009, 13:09:32 UTC

Oh, this chapter was so precious! I love it. The memory was so cute and funny.

BTW... A little long no? lol :D

raven_bard July 22 2009, 13:17:26 UTC

*rolls eyes* Yes, yes, it's long. I'm sorry. But I couldn't cut it down. I didn't even realize how long it was until my hand was aching. But that stupid restriction on posts just totally pissed me off. Urgh...had I known maybe I woulda stopped writing. *shakes head* Ok maybe not. Sorry, I'm not in the best of moods today.

But thank you for reading.

junebuggy01 July 22 2009, 13:22:30 UTC

Oh c'mon! Cheer up Chipper Monkey! :D Please refrain from beating up my smile.

And I was just kidding, the longer the better! Just more to read between these two. I didn't know that they had restrictions either though. My fics are too short.

raven_bard July 22 2009, 13:25:44 UTC

I love your fics. I think they are brilliant and beautifully written. Words don't matter so long as the story's good. Eh didn't mean to bring you down. It's just been one of those days...y'know the ones where you come home and head straight to the liquor cabinet. Yup, today is that day.

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xejanfan July 22 2009, 15:38:47 UTC

nice update, and yeah, who doesn't love a wet pepa? heh heh. woof. that's right. very sweet moments between our girls, with the hospital bed snuggles and the swimming lesson. and i'm so glad that DL has fully accepted pepa (and on the show too) and that he cares enough to call her on her shit. great update(s), hope we get more soon!

and what was this about topless marian? huh? do you still have that link? aaarrrooooooooo! *that was my wolf howl btw*

raven_bard July 22 2009, 15:58:23 UTC

Thanks for reading! Again sorry for the 2 part post. I couldn't do anything to fix it. *shakes head* Still mad about that.

As for the link, here ya go:

http://www.cotilleoblog.com/post/2862/marian-aguilera-de-los-hombres-de-paco-pillada-en-topless-galeria-de-fotos

Careful though. Seriously, I fell outta my chair, I was so shocked. Then my brain fried.

xejanfan July 22 2009, 17:58:31 UTC

guh... i'm... guh... she's... *thud*... OW! heh heh heh, i fell. *sheepish grin* gosh, like i've never seen boobies, right? cuz i totally have! and real ones too! uh, you believe me, right? ok, so i've gotta pick up the fudgecicle pop i just dropped. thanks for the link and thanks for the stories. and seriously, i like having two posts, it makes me feel like i got 2-for-1 at macy's! like i just scratched off a winning lotto ticket! woo-hoo! if i win, i'll take all of us to some european beach so we can all boobie watch! (you gotta buy your own drinks tho, even shirley temples and cigs for junebug!)

raven_bard July 23 2009, 02:43:18 UTC

*snickers* How's the bump? You didn't fall on your head did ya? When I read the thread over at AfterEllen I thought the topless pics would be some obscure distance picture where you can tell she's topless but not be able to see much. Who knew that after clicking the link we would be presented with full frontal in your face nakedness? *shakes head*

LOL btw about the 2-for-1 comment. I'm glad I didn't irritate y'all with the two posts. I really didn't intend for a long ass chapter. It just ended up that way. Probably cuz I wrote it out first. If I type, it tends to be shorter.

A trip to Europe sounds so fun. Sand, sun, topless women...oh gods we are such pervs. Lol

curlygrrl75 July 22 2009, 16:09:02 UTC

You grrls!!! lol Nice to know I am not the only one with a gutter mind!!!

love the story Raven_ bard please keep them coming and make them as long as you want them!!!

raven_bard July 23 2009, 02:44:11 UTC

*blush* Yeah....I don't think we stand a chance on hauling our minds outta the gutter when it comes to Pepa/Silvia. Thank you for your awesome comments!

curlygrrl75 July 23 2009, 03:22:40 UTC

I love it....I am in the gutter with you both is there room for me even though I don't write any fanfic??? I am your number one supporter and will do favours...!!! (WINK WINK NUDGE NUDGE)

raven_bard July 23 2009, 03:29:10 UTC

You are a PepSi fan so c'mon down to the gutter party! *holds out hands in welcome* As for your other comment....*BLUSH*

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scrubs July 22 2009, 16:23:34 UTC

Squee. This is just too cute. It also works so well as a build up to the Hangar scene with Pepa being the "teacher" and how she always knows how best to calm silvia down when she's in freakout mode.

Are you sure you don't work for LHDP? Because you should. hah.

raven_bard July 23 2009, 02:45:58 UTC

I didn't think about that as a buildup to the Hangar scene until you mentioned it. Wow! Thanks for adding depth to my story, you rule! Nah I don't work for 'em. If I did that season finale would NOT have ended the way it did. Pepa and Silvia would have gotten their wedding dance, made their toasts and snuck off to break in that soccer stadium sized bed of theirs. *winks*

Thanks for reading and commenting!

scrubs July 23 2009, 04:08:57 UTC

Haha, you're kidding! I really thought you were drawing parallels to that scene 'cause it just works so well. Ah, either way, thoroughly enjoying this.

kiarcheo July 22 2009, 18:00:34 UTC

sooooooooooooooo nice!! the swimming lesson was so sweet...
and I'll repeat myself, but a chapter is never too long...I'll bear the so called inconvenience to click on link, I don't think I'll strain my finger XD

raven_bard July 23 2009, 02:48:12 UTC

Thank you for thinking so. Like I mentioned I was at the beach yesterday writing this. I got inspired watching a little girl run around her sandcastle brandishing her water gun at gods only knows what imaginative creatures she had cooked up in her mind. It kinda reminded me of Pepa actually, lol.