Romancing the Pain - Part 1

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: This is not gonna be a happy ride guys. Obviously, the title gives it away. Whoops. Our girls have to deal with the

Comments

[extessie]

Oh this is gooood.
Wow.
The emotions are again so raw...so real. I love it! I have to complement your writing again, cuz it simply IS amazing. Wondering where Silvia is, to leave Pepa all alone to sulk in depressiveness.
Hope to see more of this fic soon, as I am in love with it already =]

[raven_bard]

Thank you. Wow you got to this new entry fast. *winks*

[extessie]

Hahaha yeah....I guess that happens when I look for new fics almost every 5 minutes.. *blushes*

=D

[xejanfan]

oh my, that was hurty and angsty and beautiful. i'm glad you're dealing with the aftermath, even though i know i'm gonna cry and hurt and not get my smut. and i know that you won't let the girls suffer without at least a little bit of comfort from each other, so i'll find a way to be content with that!

Silvia could sooth away all of Pepa’s pain and sorrow.
She immediately reached out for her wife, a gesture that was natural as it was almost unconscious.

these two lines made me fall for you all over again, raven! i'll let you decide where we'll go on our honeymoon! ;)

[raven_bard]

WILL they be finding comfort in each other? *sly grin*

I love your comments...seriously the fact the you pick out bits that you like and comment on them...I've gone all mushy inside. Lol. Thanks babe.

Hmm...where WOULD we go on our honeymoon? *thinks* Lemme get back to you on that. *winks*

[xejanfan]

actually, shouldn't we wait for junebug and let her get her opinion, since i'm kidnapping her too so we can have a three-way marriage? i mean, i wouldn't want anonymous1991 to get blue-vagged when i can take juney for myself! and you, you complete me *makes circle motion with two pointer fingers* you and i can go wakeboarding while junebug makes us lunch! *assumes fetal position while junebug finds appropriate size rock to chuck at me*

and i said in my comment that the girls would find "at least a little bit" of comfort, you're not even gonna let them have THAT?! oh c'mon! a look? a touch? a bit of grief_smut? nada? see, you make me mushy inside too, but like with a meat tenderizer! you know, that pointy mallet hammer thing in the kitchen? i'm tellin' ya, it's a damn good thing i heart you!

[raven_bard]

*chuckles* Oh honey you are warped. *snickers* However there will be no domestic violence in this three-way marriage. Junebug can throw...jello at you. *nods* Jello. Then she can lick it off you. And I wanna watch. *wicked grin*

Hmm...let's do an adventurous honeymoon. We can go visit the pyramids of Giza, go snowboarding in Switzerland, go backpacking throughout Europe where we'll pit stop at Dracula's castle in Romania cuz I've always wanted to go and you and junebug can add in your itineraries. *grins*

Grief_smut? The hell is that?!? *shakes head* No smut...well possibly not. They're grieving! Love that mallet meat tenderizer metaphor btw. It's nice to know I have that effect on you. *makes whipping motion with hand...smirks*

[raven_bard]

Hmm...will just have to wait and see huh? Thanks for liking the beginning of this new story. Greatly appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. :-)

[raven_bard]

*blush* I swear this is the reaction I get every time I read your comments. Lol. But thank you again. I might take up your advice...but after I finish uni. Writing does take a lot of one's time...and I'd rather have a substantial amount of free time to concentrate on it. Even with this fic, I'm gonna have to start up a schedule to work this in with my other priorities. Tsk...I hate my brain.

I promise to have a look at your project but I'm not sure if I can participate. Again it all boils down to the pain in my ass that calls itself uni. *rolls eyes*

Thanks for commenting and reading by the way. :-D

[lenageek]

Ooh, damn that was good! So angsy, hurty and you've got me gaping at the screen wondering 'Where's Silvia?!' What happened? Guh, I can't wait!

I was almost expecting a happier story alluding to the honeymoon but it makes sense that they'd have to deal with reality first - I just hope they come out whole and happy at the end! I'm a sucker for angst but always prefer happy stuff at the end - we already got enough angst through the actual ep.

Wonderful effort and I'm so happy you were able to fit this in amongst assignments! Thank you for making my day with this since I always love to see your fanfic pop up on my friends page.

[raven_bard]

*pats back* Shhh...calm down. You'll find out in chapter 2. If I ever get round to writing it.

Yeah...it would have been kinda weird for them to jump straight into the land of happy when they haven't dealt with this part yet. But I am veering for a happy-ish ending. We'll see where this goes.

I am trying to fit this amongst my assignments. But that means updates will be infrequent sometimes. Lo siento!

[lenageek]

Whew, thanks for the back pat - I get a little excitable around your fics! No apologies needed about getting to writing in the middle of your assignments - at least you're diligent about scheduling time in to do it and still get your homework done! Ha!

I've got Pepsi fanfic in my head but am no where near as organized as you in terms of getting it down on the screen! Then again, I'm still working on Pepsi icons, so that's taking up my time now - it's both frustrating trying to get it them to look the way I want to (I'm a real techie idiot - have never done Photoshop or anything remotely like it) and fun at the same time.

[raven_bard]

The schedule thing is a futile attempt. I never keep to it. I always end up doing things at the last minute. I seriously drive myself to the brink of insanity sometimes.

You ARE on a roll with these PepSi icons. Every new comment from you comes with a new icon. It's soo cool! Love this latest one. That scene was hilarious. She looked and sounded just like a lil kid. *chuckles* And yeah, I'm technology impaired when it comes to photo editing. Can't do it to save my life. The most I use is clipart and even that's hard for me to use!