[Fic] Tezuka/Fuji; Lost along the Way

[ravenery]

Title: Lost along the way
Fandom: Prince of Tennis 
Characters: Tezuka, Fuji
Summary: After going pro, Tezuka would have never believed that Fuji could be part of his life again.
A/N: Uhm, it indeed includes real tennis. Enjoy? ♥

Comments

[paranoid_fridge]

Nice ^__^

Liked how you portrayed Tezuka's emotions. He may not show them much, but he is certainly capable of getting angry. And making him unconsciously jealous of Fuji put a wonderful twist on things.

Thank you for sharing!

[ravenery]

Thank YOU so much for commenting ♥ I sometimes hate the way the series depict him partly so... two-dimensional, which is why I wanted to create him a bit more human. I'm glad it seemed to have worked. Thank you! :D

[falleny]

ö.ö Das war schnell!

Wie gesagt, ich liebe diese Messages der zwei, aber irgendwie bin ich auch total vernarrt in diesen Satz hier:

“For once,” Tezuka says, and he doesn’t even notice that his voice grows louder, “take tennis seriously.”

♥ Tezuka kann also doch mehr sagen und fühlen als "Yudan sezu ni ikou" |D

[ravenery]

Jaaa, habs länger geplant, zu posten xD;;

Ohhh, danke <3 Gerade bei dem Satz war ich mir unsicher |D Danke <3
Kann er wohl, aber von seiner Schulter kommt er nie los XDD

[ketchupblood]

DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW LONG IT'S BEEN SINCE I'VE READ A GOOD TEZUKA/FUJI FIC?! ZOMG.

I really like your Tezuka. He's... very real. And your Fuji, too. He doesn't have the passion that Konomi seems to have given him at the end of PoT, but if he did then he wouldn't be Fuji. You captured that wonderfully. Gorgeous fic. ♥

[ravenery]

SDKAHS NO?! ;////////; AKJAHSKDk your comment makes me SO happy <3

Thank you SO much! Especially coming from you, since you're one of the few authors I look up to. ♥ I intended to make them more real (especially Tezuka) and I'm glad it didn't turn out too out of character xD;
(Btw, I am glad you're back from hiatus! *_*)

[thisawesomelove]

This is so awesome!

The way you made the characters out is wonderful. If only I could write like this!

[ravenery]

Wow, thank you so much ♥ Your comment means a lot to me!
(Your icon is very beautiful, btw *o*)

[dark_kana]

YOU!!!! You've update a TeFu fic!!! AND I LOVE IT!!!! XD
Gosh, you did such a good job on portraiting Tezuka and his feelings. And Fuji and the interaction between the 2 of them! And and .. ♥

Whenever he still does, however, there is a lean arm reaching out and embracing him loosely, soothing heartbeat against his back, and he can fall asleep again.
*squeels and fails*

And I love the last part! XD
Oh! And the part where Tezuka tells Fuji to take tennis serious!! <3

Honest, I love this story so very very much!!! ^^

[ravenery]

ajsgajgsa oh Kana, thank you so much Q/////Q ♥
You know that your comments (especially adorable comments like that! aksjaksh) never fail to cheer me up <3 And I'm so glad you liked it! I usually spend a lot of time thinking about how to portray the characters, and I'm happy it didn't come across too weird or something xD

<333 I had a REALLY hard time thinking about the last part, which is why your comment makes me squeal xD Thank you SO much! ^/////^ *dances*

[dark_kana]

You're very welcome! I was so surprised to see you updated a TeFu fic... XD But I loved it! I really do!! XD
Portraying characters isn't always easy. But you did an awesome job on them! ^^ They're just Tezuka and Fuji and ♥

Finding an ending truely isn't easy. But you did, once again, an amazing job on it! XD I really love the ending! *grins*