Short original fic...

[ravensilver]

I'd asked an artist over on DA to do a commission for me. It was just a scene that had suddenly popped into my mind.

She did the commission, and it came out *perfect*! (Go look at it here...)As sometimes happens with these things, it didn't leave me alone. Instead, the scene insisted on actually being written out

Comments

[amarissia]

Pretty picture. And interesting story. So sad!

Cloud: *sniffles, waves*

[ravensilver]

*waves back*

Just thought of you guys a few days back... saw something that I think Cloud will like... ^^

Thank you!

But... did you like it? Was there redundancy? Were there sentences that you thought were awkward? Anything jump out at you as bad writing?

[amarissia]

Cloud: *bounce* "What did you see? Was it a kitty?"

Nothing bad stood out to me. I didn't really connect too much with it, but that's probably because I don't like Italian names.

[ravensilver]

Actually... about that kitten part... I think I need to do another LJ post... ^^ You'll like this one, Cloud.

But no, I saw something else.

Ah, ok. Thank you. No problem. ^^ But I couldn't call the poor guy anything else, seeing as how he *is* Italian. *ggg*

Eh... any particular reason for your dislike? >.>

Martin J Potter

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