'Becoming X' - Part three

Sep 24, 2010 19:06

Frank/Gerard
Rating: R

Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 7

defect_no9 September 25 2010, 01:40:26 UTC
I'm so in love with this, that's it's not even funny. The Sci-Fi element of having an android and hackers?! AWESOME. Gerard's depth and curiosity shows how human he really is. In fact, he's more human than most of the other characters. I love Frank in this type of harden role, and appreciate the gritty realism behind his character. Gerard in many ways made me think of Edward
Scissorhands. Only hotter. Where can I purchase one? Lol! I can't praise this enough!

Reply


thewhiteviolin September 25 2010, 03:12:19 UTC
This story was perfect. You created this very realistic 'verse and characters and relationships that completely enveloped me while I was reading! Amazing! Thank you!

Reply


mourning_night September 25 2010, 04:55:57 UTC
This is wonderful. I love the mix of noir and cyber punk you've created. I like how Frank's old memories are intercut with his current time and how he has to grow to accept Gerard. The scene of Frank getting introduced to Brian's earlier droid attempts was one of my favorites. I really like this 'verse you've created.

Reply


northernveil September 25 2010, 14:28:59 UTC
Huh. Very interesting. I liked it. Thank you for posting.

Reply


mitchiemarie October 3 2010, 14:16:53 UTC
This was amazing
Very gritty and realistic
I love Gerard and how heseems almost human
Poor Brian though
I love gabe's cameo
and the tech-world that Is basically all frank knows
and even if It betrayed him once he'd still go back for the adrenaline and the risk.
his wife though, she must have been incredulous and destroyed.
(for awhile and then got over it and found another husband ?)
<3 I loved it!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up