Mission 8: A Case of Emotions Unchronicled

[rc_6237]

Rating: T/PG-13
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes

Comments

[vgdivision]

A very entertaining mission. You write some excellent interactions between Lee and Ian here, especially the underwear banter bit. The one complaint I have is in regard to pacing; the story feels a bit jerky at times and the bit where the agents finally move in feels very rushed.

All in all, keep up the good work.

[rc_6237]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the mission. As for the pacing, the fic itself was rather jerky, and I think the mission reflected that. The ending was rushed as well- there was a month-long time-skip I chose not to deal with -but all in all I think the mission turned out well.