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✖ jongin x sehun | pg | romance
✖ 1,249 w.
✖ summary : once there was a time, love was just a myth.
✖ a/n : a lame birthday present to my awesome dongsaeng
seisdemayo ♡ thanks to my special girls, my cutie kitten
mingtaeng & my special cutie pie
ohmysekai for helping me beta read this
♡ also special thanks to nice girl
bluedveins for great information ! :D
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you are so cute and sweet and precious, orz.
your english is really fine!!! and i like how you described and wrote how jongin finally understood what love really is through the form of sehun. ;___________;
there is a thin thread or string that connects him and sehun together
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push and pull forces
i like this so much. >:(
and his answer is sehunTHIS ( ... )
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so you found this by yourself and read while i'm feeling so embarrassed ; w ;'' ...
about my fic ... you need to thanks to bsb's song ;9 i wrote this because i love that song so much it hurts /sobs
normally i only write something like this ... always pg orz ... forever pg
and i'm not good with other genre :l ...
basically, only effort i put in this was when i tried to re-write this in eng lol
it was the most difficult part XD
thanks to vic & den ' v ' they helped me proved this fic before i posted it here ~
thank you so much & love you too ♥♥♥♥
ps. again, i promise you ; __ ; august 10 next year i will give you a whole new fic ! (but i need to upgrade my eng skill first lol)
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and I think this is pretty good ^ ^
about the titling.. omg.. it's okay unnie XDD
I'm actually glad you didn't use the one I suggested :p
you're my lovely unnie hahaha ♥
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thank you so so so so much baby !
love you vicky, forever my baby ♡
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thank you so much ^ ^ ♪
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Sweet...very sweet.
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thank you so much for reading & commenting! ; ;
this is my first time posting something in LJ so ... lol
i'm so excited when i see your comment here ! *HUG*
thanks again ! ♡♡
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yes of course ! ; v ; we're friend 'cause i already love you now ! ♡♡♡♡
i would love to read your comment again
but eng is not my language ; ;
in my daily life i actually don't use it, i use eng only in twitter/tumblr/LJ orz /sobs
so it's very hard to write something in eng this long ; A ;''
normally i write fic but in thai only ; u ;' but i always think that i should use this chance to improve my eng skill by writing fic in eng more ! XD
if you don't mind my crap eng then you're more than welcome to read my fic in the future lol ~
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Moving on, I really enjoyed this, throughout. Mainly because it was just love, simple, unbounded, light, glass-like love, the kind that there's no mistaking it when you read about it! It didn't need a complicated plot or a scary length, just the perfect choice of words and everyone can understand it's sincere. All in all, beautifully written!
Again, my love goes to you Nana ~~<3 : >
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and no ! don't worry i'm not serious ! lol
just you visited here and dropped me a cute comment like this make my heart skip a beat ; v ; ~ ♡
thank you so much baby ♡ ♡
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