Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 12

[realynn8]

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 12
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

Comments

[aliceandjazzz]

I loved this chapter! All of the adorable images you put in my head, Jasper and Alice bathing Amber, Alice getting emotional over the crib, and my favorite-Jasper playing his guitar for Amber. And of course anytime Jasper is shirtless is good for me! The way Alice described Jasper's look as haunting seemed very accurate to me, and i loved how Jasper kissed her forehead. That seemed like such an intimate moment. I really loved it a lot :)It was also a longer chapter, which made me happy! The longer the better!

And on a little side note, I loved how Bella and Edward sent a lion and a lamb. It's the little things in life :).

Sorry for the ridiculously long comment!

[applecandy22]

the lion and lamb made me giggle!

[realynn8]

That is great! :)

[realynn8]

Oh hun, thank you so much. I was so worried about this chapter, lol. And therefore I am really happy you liked it. :) And don't worry about the review, the longer the better. ;)

I am happy that you liked their sweeter moments, and also the lion and the lamb thing. ;)

[marsuk]

Ahh Great writing
I like them stealing glances at each other

[realynn8]

Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it. :)

[applecandy22]

A lion and a lamb! aww , edward and bella! that really made me smile!
Is Jasper is Amber's daddy now? wooot!! I loveed that! sounds like Emmet! I love the way you get every character to stay true to the way Stephanie Meyer created them. You are talented!
I want to know what Jasper's book has!
Thanks a lot!
Beautiful entry!!!
It's what I've been hoping for!

[realynn8]

I am glad I was able to make you smile. :)

Aww, thank you so much, you make me blush. You are so sweet. I am really happy you like the characterization, I always wonder if I do it right.

In the next chapter, you are going to find out.

Thank you so much!

[frust_sheep]

Honey, you are too good to be true. *lol* ;) Oh and you are killing me. ;) I had this to write now. *lol* You will get of course the longer review too, if I have it finished. :)
<3 I SO LOVE IT <3

[realynn8]

Really? Oh, that makes me super happy. Thank you so much! *hugs* I have a little surprise for you, although it is not related to this story. You'll find out soon. ;)

[frust_sheep]

Yeah, really. :D :) As I said already you are so very welcome. I so so love it really. <3 <3 <3
Hm, so now I have to say really??? *lol* *blush* But I hope you know, you don't have to. For me it's always a wonderful and lovely surprise to read something from you. :)

[realynn8]

Aww, thank you so much! *hug*

Yup, you'll see soon. ;)

[realynn8]

Yeah. :) I couldn't help myself after you mentioned it. The credit goes entirely to you. :)