Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 12

Jun 01, 2009 22:46


Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 12
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.


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lys_chan_83 June 2 2009, 02:17:38 UTC
Another beautiful chapter, dear. You are awesome. I love how little Amber is bonding (?)them. And I also love Emmett's logic. I suppose that being in his place is like watching a Soap, you just want to have them talk -and kiss- each other for once. I'm dying here wanting to know what was the reason for her to leave Jazz. Please!!!

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realynn8 June 2 2009, 08:17:24 UTC
Aww, thank you so much. *hugs* I am glad you liked Emmett, he is like a big child. ;)

Oh, you are going to find that out in the next chapter. Everything is going to come out. Everything.

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andre07hsm June 2 2009, 02:21:13 UTC
OMG mon,why you doing this to me?..you can´t make me wait pleaseeeee
this chapter is one of my favorites.omg alice realized that loves jasper,and she has to do something about it, right?

you are one of my favorite writers hahaha..I love your fic and makes me happy!!!
I´m going to be waiting eager the next chapter...but please, don´t make me wait too long, you are killing me..hahaha

good bye my friend
see you!!!

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realynn8 June 2 2009, 08:18:58 UTC
Hey hun! So sorry, but I promise that everything is going to come out in the next chapter, I have already worked on it. :) You will get your answers, I promise. :)

Yes, she does. Although it is not going to go down like the both plan it. Nope. ;)

Aww, thank you so much, that makes me so happy. I love you as my reader.

See you around and once again, thank you!

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ciza June 2 2009, 02:22:23 UTC
See that puddle on the floor? That was me. I melted. Right after Jasper sang the lullaby to Amber.

Ever insightful Emmett. I like your version of him. I've always thought that he really isn't dumb, just cerebrally underestimated because people associate him with his physical strength. So thank you for writing him the way you do. "...giving advice is not cheating" LOL. I'm gonna work this sentence into some real life situations somehow.
Bella and Edward sending a lion and a lamb... *gigglesnort* Classic.

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realynn8 June 2 2009, 08:20:44 UTC
*squeeee* You make me so happy. :)

Thank you so much, Claire. I am so glad you liked it. I don't think Emmett is stupid either. People do usually associate him with his strenght, but he has brains, too. True, he uses them to play games a lot, but still. ;)

LOL

Thank you!

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pamela0201 June 2 2009, 10:16:03 UTC
I loved it! Awesome Chapter. Jaspers bonding with Amber is just total WIN!

Emmett was definitely the best person she could have talked to about this - he just told her how it was.
And she's said it in her head now that she loved him :)

Jasper playing guitar for Amber was so cute

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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realynn8 June 2 2009, 10:24:44 UTC
Thank you so much, I am really happy that you liked it. :)

I am glad you agree about Emmett, I just needed to include me more and my instinct told me he was the one to do this. :)

Thank you so much!

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prettypony39 June 2 2009, 13:17:06 UTC
I understand what you meant by having this chapter...it really laid a strong foundation for upcoming events *smiles* good job.

Your characters have hints and traces of their Twilight counterparts and it's...it's nice. Lion and lamb. Carefree joking while being insightful. Protective and loyal. Parental and all-loving.

*refresh* Ok. I need to stop thinking that's gonna work. Until next week...

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realynn8 June 2 2009, 16:49:14 UTC
Thank you so much, I am really happy you liked it. :) And I am glad you like the Twilight references, I try my best. :)

Yeah, it is going to take a while, but I will do my best to upload as soon as possible.

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