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Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 12

Jun 01, 2009 22:46

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 12
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

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jasper, fanfiction, alice

Comments 45

pat3sha June 2 2009, 14:34:22 UTC

This is such an Awesome chapter.

I am loving Jasper more and more for his love for Amber and Alice. I also like the part when Alice realizes, through Emmett's advice, that she still loves Jasper.

I haven't written any reviews for the previews chapters, but i had read them (more than once :D ) and they are all sooo good. :) And I'm seriously waiting for the next chapter, I bet it will be brilliant as well.

realynn8 June 2 2009, 16:50:08 UTC

Thank you so much!

She had to realize it, I couldn't wait anymore, so there we go. :) Thank you so much for liking this story and reading it, it means a lot to me. :)

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realynn8 June 3 2009, 08:47:07 UTC

Thanks. ;) LOL I thought it funny, too.

Emmett is not as dumb some people tend to think. I like him. :) He is like a big brother with great bear hugs.

Thank you so much, I am glad you liked that. :)

ladysaruman June 3 2009, 10:20:23 UTC

HEHE, I LAUGHED TOO AT THE LION AND THE LAMB REFERENCE :)

realynn8 June 3 2009, 18:21:01 UTC

I only had the lion in it first, but then my lovely beta mentioned the lamb, and I had to add it too. :)

ladysaruman June 3 2009, 10:19:52 UTC

Popping in here like usual to show my support :)
I found a picture of shirtless Jackson recently. It made me totally swoon. His body is almost as good as Kellan's. Almost. RPatt's isn't that bad, but he needs a wax job. Seriously. AHAHAH
So today in English, our teacher showed us the New Moon trailer. We honestly were questioning what was going on inside her head. I accidentally squeaked a bit when shirtless Taylor came on the scene, and my guy friend wouldn't stop making fun of me for it. :/

realynn8 June 3 2009, 18:22:01 UTC

Thank you so much! *hug* I haven't even replied to your review at ffnet yet, but I will, I promise. It was so amazing. :)

Oh really? Share, sweetie, share. I love naked Jackson pictures. ;)

She did? Awesome. :) I would have squeed too.

Part 1 frust_sheep June 5 2009, 00:47:33 UTC

First I have to say, it was really good to show the first two months after Amber's birth and I already think, that it is the perfect stage for the next chapter. It is NOT a filler and don't believe it, when someone say, it is. ---> This shows the whole scene with the baby bath. It is a new scene and you did not mention this scene before, Jasper thought about what they need for the baby, it shows that both bath Amber (their relation) + what Alice think about it as a result etc. I hope I could express my opinion. *lol*

Second I have to say, oh honey you did a brilliant song choice again. It fit's perfectly and said so much. I so love it. :) <3 ( ... )

Re: Part 1 realynn8 June 5 2009, 09:44:14 UTC

You sure know how to make me smile and happy. :) *hugs ( ... )

Re: Part 1 frust_sheep June 5 2009, 16:15:53 UTC

As I said on fanfiction.net, you are so welcome honey. :) *hugs* And I'm really glad you like it.

Yeah, I knew it and my opinion is really, that it was the right choice and you wrote it perfectly. :)

Yeah, you did it really wonderful and alright. :)

This song was perfect for the baby. I know Live, but I did not know the song before. So thanks for the awesome song. <3

So *LOL* about the hard way. Poor Jasper. ;) *lol*

Oh of course I loved the tension and the sparks. This was so hot and I would love it, if they do something about it. ;) *cough cough* ;)

Oh yeahhhh and I'm not sure either, which I would prefer. *lol*

I so agree about music. :D

Re: Part 1 realynn8 June 5 2009, 16:30:04 UTC

Thank you so much, I know I keep thanking you but you keep amazing me, so I have to keep thanking you. So, thank you. LOL

I am very glad I could provide you with a new song. New songs are always a good thing. :)

LOL Yes, the tension is building up. And I am sure they'll have to do something about it soon. *cough*

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Part 2 frust_sheep June 5 2009, 00:49:59 UTC

I love their little walk etc., his notion of a soldier (so so in character again) and the lines: "I loved her with all my heart and I would do anything I could to protect her. And maybe protect myself, too" were fantastic and so heartbreaking and wonderful ( ... )

Re: Part 2 realynn8 June 5 2009, 09:53:04 UTC

I have no idea what I have done to deserve a two-part review. This is so amazing. *squee ( ... )

Re: Part 2 frust_sheep June 5 2009, 16:43:11 UTC

Oh Mon, then LJ get the compliment *lol*, because it said I have to cut it, it was too long for one comment. :)

Oh you managed their little walk wonderful. :D And shake hands, I can really complicate thing for myself too. But often my result is not so awesome. *lol*

Yeah, I really think this would do her character. She would be very glad, if she can leave.

I so so love the main point of this chapter and OMG for the beautiful song. The lyrics fits just so perfectly with the situation etc. <3 I love it to imagine, when Jasper play and sings it. :D ( ... )

Re: Part 2 realynn8 June 5 2009, 17:07:04 UTC

No, you get the compliment, because you wrote that much, the LJ had to cut it. :) So sweet.

I keep imaging Jasper, too. Sitting there on the couch, guitar in his hands and him singing. Aww. So wonderful.

Me too. Emmett is great and I think he is a person who can be a great friend and who is much fun to be around with. Plus, he is adorable.

Thank you so much, Lis. :) *hug*

LMAO

Of course you can, sweetie. :) I would be honored. You can chose the banner you like most. All four are wonderful. :) So much.

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