Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 14

Jun 25, 2009 12:23


Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 14
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.


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ladysaruman June 26 2009, 09:57:09 UTC
Don't forget, I'm still chasing after Maria with that torch! Well more like I'm on a search to find her mental institution...what happens after I find that will be my story to tell :)

But, by God, that was extremely...sexy. And everything I've said on FF.net :)

As a reward, I'm giving you a Jasper avatar that I found just an hour ago :) I saw it, and it reminded me of you because we're both avid Jasper-crazy fans :))

Love you! *hugs*

Now you'd better update soon! Or, as soon as you can :) *fake evil glare*

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realynn8 June 26 2009, 13:33:44 UTC
You are amazing. :)

Chase Maria and do what you want with her after you find her. She deserves the worst. ;)

Thank you so so much! I am so excited about the avatar.

LOL I will do my best. Hugs!

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ladysaruman June 27 2009, 08:34:49 UTC
Hmm...that got me thinking. Would you mind if I wrote a one-shot about it? Featuring some Maria, of course. :) It'll be plot-appropriate, and I won't incorporate any extra characters in there. And then you could make it an outtake of your story perhaps?

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realynn8 June 27 2009, 08:42:52 UTC
I don't mind at all. :) Write the one-shot, I will promote it in my story, so people will read it. And make it an outtake, sure. :)

I am already excited. Woohoo!

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ladysaruman June 26 2009, 10:00:14 UTC
<--- There it is, the avatar! ♥ Your reward for the LOVEEEEEEELY chapter. My favorite so far. Of course, knowing you, you're so going to throw in something better later. Surprise me.
HEHEE now if you don't have this avatar already, I know what you're going to do next :)
It's the sexiest avatar of him by far that I've found. I find it very hot when guys sort of glare :D

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realynn8 June 26 2009, 13:34:33 UTC
I love it. Such an amazing avatar! Thank you!!!!

He is so freaking hot and sexy it is killing me. :)

I will do my best!

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pat3sha June 26 2009, 14:36:42 UTC
wow finally. it was a brilliant idea that you split jasper and alice's pov into two chapters. the details were very clear. :) and the last part, well it was hot and i liked how you've written it.

i love this part, i can actually feel the emotion of alice. “I’m so sorry, Jasper, so sorry. I only knew how we have been when we were younger, how you always protected me. I couldn’t remember the last months before the accident. I was afraid that you were only with me because you knew how much I loved you; and were a really good and well, overprotective friend.”

very great job! :)

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realynn8 June 26 2009, 21:38:58 UTC
Thank you so much. I wanted to split this talk into two chapter, one POV in each of them, because we have waited for it so long, and I didn't want to get it over too quick. I am glad you approve. :)

Thank you!

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applecandy22 June 26 2009, 20:42:47 UTC
damn! I wanted to comment here first!
I kept checking all the time!
I loved the way she wiped his hands..so sweet. When his hand was bleeding it was like his love ran so deep, like blood red passionate.
I LOVED it! ohh, I am so happy for the characters!
Thank you for writing such a beautiful fic!

I hope this isnt the end! now that they're back together, what's gonna happen? Is Maria gonna make an unexpected appearance? hhahaaa
besos!!!!

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realynn8 June 26 2009, 21:40:01 UTC
LOL No worries, hun, I am glad you are here now. :):)

I am really glad you liked it. I am happy for them, too. I think they deserved it.

Nope, this is not the end yet. I have another surprise up my sleeve. ;)

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applecandy22 June 26 2009, 21:47:14 UTC
yay!! there's more!

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realynn8 June 26 2009, 21:49:07 UTC
Yup, there is. :)

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andre07hsm June 27 2009, 20:32:42 UTC
OMG...was amazing
I´m so happy!!!!! :D
the song is perfect for them..
worth waiting
thanks mon!!!was perfect!!!

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realynn8 June 28 2009, 10:50:49 UTC
Thank you, hunni. I am glad you like it. :)
And I am really happy you think the song fit, that is great.

Thank you so much!

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