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Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 14

Jun 25, 2009 12:23

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 14
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

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jasper, fanfiction, alice

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latest chapter emanthon July 6 2009, 01:12:03 UTC

i've loved reading your story... i don't really do FF but needed some j/a love and found your AU storyline intriguing and interesting.one that's kept me hooked and waiting for more. can't wait to see where it goes!

Re: latest chapter realynn8 July 6 2009, 08:36:44 UTC

Thank you so much. I am really glad you like it. :)

frust_sheep August 9 2009, 19:41:42 UTC

Yeah, I'm still in delay..., but I try. ;) *lol ( ... )

realynn8 August 18 2009, 11:42:20 UTC

Hey Lis! Once again I have to apologize. It has again taking me forever to reply to your review and that was bad from me, especially since I adore your reviews so much. *hugs ( ... )

frust_sheep August 23 2009, 17:14:11 UTC

Hey honey. :)
Oh no, please, you don't have to apologize. I still have to apologize, because I'm so slow with my reviews.

Oh yes, so good that the older age has some good sides. ;)

Awww thanks sweetie. :) *hugs* And for me it is always a pleasure to read a chapter from you. :)

Oh yeah, I love the song + I'm so glad, to have their cd. :D

Oh yes, yes, this was really a perfect scene, where Jasper needed some release. I can so imagine this too, that he would do this. *awww when I would really see this* ;)

Oh believe me, it worked all so fine together. A so wonderful and well thought out work. Just perfect sweetie. :)

Yes, I so agree on here too on both parts. But as you said, Jasper would do everything to make her happy...so he understand and forgive.

I really admire you for this Mon, that you gave Maria a reason etc.

:)

realynn8 August 24 2009, 10:07:45 UTC

Thanks. :) And don't worry about it.

Aww, thank you so much. *blushes*

I think Alice is a lot harder to write than Jasper is. With Jasper I am so obssessed already, I usually know what he thinks and how he would act. LOL But this is my version of Jasper, so it might be different if S. Meyer wrote him. Probably.

Thank you so much. I'm glad I can make you happy. :)

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frust_sheep August 9 2009, 19:45:16 UTC

PART 2 ( ... )

realynn8 August 18 2009, 11:51:14 UTC

Squee, part 2 ( ... )

frust_sheep August 23 2009, 17:33:50 UTC

Oh thank you so much that you gave them some peace. :D And yeah, they really suffered so so much already. *sniffle*

Oh yes, the window scene, oh my, this was so perfection at it's best. I really could already see this to happen in my mind and OMG it was so so overwhelming to read it. *squee* :D

Yeah, they are both so so sad etc, you really just want to give these two a big hug.

Oh good to know about Maria, that she can not hurt someone again.

Yeah, she would never forget her baby and I so agree on the part, too, that they needed the closeness so much, especially after so much time, hurt...

Oh honey, I really enjoyed and loved it so so much. :D Awesome work, it fits all perfectly. + this adult part make it still more spicier. ;) *lol*

I hope you have/had a lovely day, too. :)

realynn8 August 24 2009, 10:06:03 UTC

You're very welcome. :)

I am so glad you liked that. I just needed to write it like that, I had it in my head all day long, when I imagine the scenes after the fight.

Thank you so much for all your nice words, I am really happy you agree with my decisions and actually, think a lot like I do.

Thanks, bb. :) I will try to make it like that in the future chapters too.

Love you!

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