Very short fic: Why Wait?

[redoren]

I should SOOOOOO be in bed asleep, instead I'm posting this.

Why Wait?

Disclaimer: I don't own them, what's with that? :( Okay, honestly, I don't own them because someone else does and they make money from them but I don't. One day I'll make my own characters, then I'll make money from them, but they won't be these characters. I just play with these

Comments

[obsessive_a101]

This was really sad, but... I don't know, it really works. It helps that the scene was painted so beautifully. (^^)

[redoren]

Thank you :D It's always nice to know that someone enjoyed reading something I've written :) It makes me feel happy.

I know, it was a bit sad. Hopefully I'll have something happier written soon to balance it out :D

[stiletto_freek]

This was so sad..I am sad..but in a very beautiful way...wait..my crying is not beautiful..I am miserable.

thanks it was great read..albeit everyone died:)

[redoren]

LOL! Glad you liked it...sort of :) I know, it was a bit sad but let's just assume that something happens after this fic that means they all live. Perhaps none of it was real, perhaps they're all Cylons, perhaps death leads the way to Earth? Perhaps there is an afterlife and Adama and Roslin live there forever in total bliss in a little cabin on a peaceful and prettier New Caprica? :D Perhaps he finally takes the hint and kisses her on those sand bags? We can but dream :D

[stiletto_freek]

OMG!

perhaps death leads the way to Earth?

that sounds like fic. Like they kiss and then they feel that their souls are being separated from bodies, coldness was replaced by warmth that filled their every sense. They were floating, there was no gravity and bright light cascaded around the. they closed their eyes and waited for death to take them, to disappear. But then their senses were again filled with life. Blood rusher through their veins. And they were alive. Earth. ...bla bla bla...

ha, I have course paper to write and I am heading to library, so yes I am distracting myself. And you should write happy ending to this :)

[redoren]

LOL! I think you pretty much wrote what I had in mind :D Nice one :)

[caramelapples11]

That was just beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

[redoren]

Thank you for commenting! :) It TOTALLY makes my day! I mean, a LOT! :D

[aphroditesreign]

I can see it happening that way. Just one of many, but I seriously hope it doesn't. Beautiful, but oh so sad. Then again, if they actually make it to earth, they'll be locked up like the 4400, that is if we don't blow them out of the sky first. I'd rather see your vision than that one. ;-)

[redoren]

LOL! I'd rather the ship blew up in a strange but rather poetic way rather than they end up like the 4400. I'm still getting over how crappy that show ended up being before it got cancelled :( I totally saw it coming, the whole cancellation thing. It was sad because the first season was SO promising!

[lullabymoon]

Beautiful angst.

These are not words I often say together but this is gorgeous.

[redoren]

Aw, thank you :) I really appreciate that ::huggles::