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eight2xero June 23 2003, 14:17:59 UTC
makes sense to me. i feel very much the same way, very often.

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asocialfemme June 23 2003, 14:34:14 UTC
I feel the same way.

What vonnegut book? i've only read one by him.

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mothballmint June 23 2003, 16:16:14 UTC
judging by content I would have to guess Breakfast of Champions

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redrae June 28 2003, 01:09:31 UTC
breakfast of champions is correct

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xyourbestbetx June 23 2003, 15:38:44 UTC
i get the people from high school. who show up now occasionaly or I run into and they try to act like we were friends or try to be my friend.
sucka's
~s

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deathrockboy June 23 2003, 17:20:37 UTC
i don't know if it's "good" or whatever, but it was fun to read, which i guess makes it "great".

my only advice is to say that making a point or expressing an idea isn't necessarily as important as making something fun to read, and the only thing that makes something fun to read is knowing that the writer had fun writing it.

in other words, don't communicate meaning explicitly. write with meaning, and then the meaning is instantly understood.

:)

keep at it.

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redrae June 28 2003, 01:10:52 UTC
ha.......that's the point. i wasn't trying to write something pretty, i hate writing and I hate words. I was just trying to make it make sense and it wasn't working out too well for me.

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yourmooseyfate June 23 2003, 17:40:27 UTC
makes sense to me. i agree, to a point. definitely that a person's behaviour is altered by the actions of those around him/her.

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