Fatal Choice Part 2 B

Nov 11, 2009 18:17

                He closed his eyes and took in a shuddering breath, before gritting his teeth, opening them again and forcing the gun into Kazuya’s mouth.

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‘What the fuck, Akanishi?’ The bosses shout dragged him from his thoughts, and he realised in a heartbeat that he’d hesitated for a moment too many. Isamu was reaching ( Read more... )

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elanielyn November 11 2009, 19:02:20 UTC
I was waiting for this ;____;
In fact I had lost hopes of an update, but I'm so glad you haven't left his fic unfished! I really like its development, and hope the next part won't take so long.

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redturtleotaku November 13 2009, 23:42:28 UTC
I'm so sorry it took me so long! I kind of fell out of the fandom for a while.
Thanks for still reading despite the wait, and I'm glad that you're still enjoying it!
I promise to try to finish it soon!
Thanks! :)

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aluakard November 11 2009, 20:06:21 UTC
I really really REALLY REALLY NEED NOW UPDATE!!!

I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENED FURTHER!!!

This chapter was amasing!! SO much action, so many feelings!!!

*hug you tightly*

Gambare!!! ;-)

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redturtleotaku November 14 2009, 14:06:06 UTC
Woooo! I think that's a good sign!
I'll definitely be updating sooner this time!
I'm really glad that you liked this chapter!
*hugs back*
Thank you!

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redturtleotaku November 14 2009, 14:09:01 UTC
It's not the end! Sorry I should have been more clear about that!

Ooooh Ki lost composure? *feels proud* haha.

Compliments on language use are always very much appreciated! So you made me smile with this.

As you said I still have to explore Kazuya's character, it's going to be quite the challenge but I'm looking forward to giving it a go!

You gotta keep pushing me to write! Thanks as always! <3

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silverrain184 November 12 2009, 00:17:46 UTC
OMG, I'm so happy you updated this fic!
I loved the first part and this...the whole story is amazing!
I didn't realize I was holding my breath the whole last part.
The way you write is awesome and I felt like crying because at first I thought that this would be the end but now I hope you'll write a 3rd part!
They can't end like this!!!
Ah, it's so intense.

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redturtleotaku November 17 2009, 00:28:24 UTC
I'm glad that my story has moved you so much, it's a great thing for a 'writer' to hear!
Don't worry, I'll be writing a third part!
I do tend to write intense >_<
Glad that you like it so far! Thanks!

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silvertwinster November 12 2009, 03:28:51 UTC
ohmygawd an update! I've been waiting so long for this *__*

I can't seem to form any coherant praise in my massively flailing mind right now, so kindly accept a keymash from me: adfjkahsdkahk ♥

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redturtleotaku November 17 2009, 00:29:32 UTC
Sorry for keeping you waiting for so long!

Haha keymashes are appreciated too XD

Glad that you're enjoying it so far!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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