The Ash amongst the Stars - Chapter 4

Jul 15, 2010 22:26

            Despite the extraordinary level of skill that he demonstrated at such a young age, Akanishi Jin could take little pride or pleasure in his current task. He narrowed his eyes as the shadow of a man fell over him; the oldest and supposedly wisest of the elders, Takeyama.

‘I know that you can work faster, Jin.’ The tip of the ( Read more... )

the ash amongst the stars - fic

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fullhouse_10 July 15 2010, 22:16:00 UTC
Update :DDDDDD
I'm SO VERY curious about what Jin is going to say to his father and in general how things will evolve between him and Yamapi!:
Great chapter as usual...but Jun is a jerk (but I still like him :p)

Thanks for the fast update :))))

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redturtleotaku July 16 2010, 21:49:36 UTC
Haha yeah I feel like I'm finally getting to the main storyline! Looking forward to writing it :p

Jun a jerk? Do you really mean that? Haha he's fun to write so I'm glad that you still kind of like him!

I'll try to update again soon! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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dorayaki_chan July 16 2010, 02:20:49 UTC
What,s jin up to ?? Can,t wait for your next chap X)

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redturtleotaku July 16 2010, 21:51:18 UTC
I'm looking forward to revealing more about Jin. Glad that you're still interested! Thanks for reading and commenting!

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wasabidreams July 16 2010, 09:07:16 UTC
AFLJSAGBCLJKSABVAISFHSOÖFBASKL.

YES. AGAIN AND AGAIN, YEEEEESSS!

I love you <3

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redturtleotaku July 16 2010, 21:52:07 UTC
So you liked it? haha.

Thank you!

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wasabidreams July 17 2010, 08:59:10 UTC
Well, i can't really say that i liked it.

I LOVED IT :D :D :D

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bluelillie July 16 2010, 10:35:08 UTC
Great chapter!

Really enjoying reading this!

Update soon!!

:)

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redturtleotaku July 27 2010, 13:48:23 UTC
Thank you!
I'm so glad that you're enjoying it.
I'm working on the next chapter now. :)

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New chapter!! plumeria_alba July 16 2010, 13:01:15 UTC
I wonder what'll happened next so I'll wait for the next chapter ne, fighting~~

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Re: New chapter!! redturtleotaku July 27 2010, 13:49:11 UTC
It's going to start getting more dramatic soon, I think. Haha. Working on the next chapter now. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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