Please Notice Me--KHR Fanfic

[reidluver]

Title: Please Notice Me
Author: Reidluver
Words: 5,302
Characters/Pairings: Fuuta, Tsuna, Lambo, Hibari, Gokudera
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Language

Summary: 5YL As the only one not an official Guardian or with any specific fighting skills, Fuuta feels useless and unable to contribute anything to his Family. However, he plans to change all that by

Comments

[reidluver]

XD It's nothing too big, just Gokudera caught him taking care of little abandoned kittens. It's actually a sort of oneshot I've had in mind for a while but never really had the time yet to post it...supposed to be a way for them to bond over their mutual love for small, furry animals. XD I'll post it sometime...

And thanks! My darling Fuuta--I've had fun writing him and now I want to write more.

*smirk* No, it wasn't my intention. I just wanted to have them on the mission. Perhaps I'll take down the notice about the crack pairing. XD For me, I'm not really writing a pairing unless the two people kiss or make some other obvious show that they're together.

Though I do like them on missions together. I find they would make an interesting dynamic. XD Thanks for commenting! Ooo, and glancing through my inbox I've noticed you wrote a story about Lambo? Have you posted it to ff.net yet? Cuz I sure haven't gotten any email notification about it yet...I'll read it after I've gone babysitting. :)

[reidluver]

I shall! Oh...right! I remember something about that..where Tsuna caught him doing that..XD

Yeah, I prefer bonding. I just love bromance/male bonding! And it's even better for these two because they're so different and yet so similar in ways. :)

And weird...I got the notice for that fic like last night or so. FF.net must be a little behind or maybe they just don't like you. XD

[daydreamer_raia]

Poor Fuuta. He's so tough but so overlooked. (The kitten incident amused me too :) ) You had some fun interactions in here. Nicely done!

[reidluver]

Yeah, I really wish there was more out there about the poor guy, and I'm just gonna be the one to change that. XD And thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[daydreamer_raia]

Awww, go you! :) Minor characters need love too.
Your fic made me want a Fuuta scarf. Really. Except that I don't like stripes. Or white. And yet, I'm trying to figure out how I would go about making one XD

[reidluver]

XD Sweet! His scarf is so cute! You are totally cursed with your knitting ability.

Oh, and love the new icon btw.

[100paperfans]

Weee, I loved this. So much. You wrote about Fuuta! The deserves credit just for that!

And this line: "Wait-are you going to shoot lightning at me again?" I lol'ed. It seemed very much like something Gokudera would do - and I enjoyed the way you wrote Lambo. Actually, strike that. I enjoyed the way you wrote each character included!

While it is 1000 words over the word limit, we seem to be getting a lot of conventional fics this time around and I don't see why this one can't be included as well. I will properly talk to the other mods before the deadline and we will let you know if we can't accept it.

I just want you to know I liked this a lot, though. And the fact you participated means quite a bit as well. Thank you!

[reidluver]

Awww, thank you so much! :) Heh, glad you like the lightning part--I can easily see Gokudera doing that and having a blast.

And thank you so much for our consideration--thankfully I was able to shorten it and I thank all of you for the 300 word leeway you gave. :) Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity! :)

[rade_zahitya]

kitten incident xDD I can easily picture Hibari with kittens :p

This full version is so SWEET! No, forgive my lame choice of word. But it's just so....ARRGH *tears my pillow open*
SO CUTEADORABLESWEETANDGAVEMEAFUZZYWARMFEELINGINMYHEART !!!

*coughs* that aside, I actually wanted to see how Hibari would 'take care of the remaining herbivores'. That'll teach them not to mess around with Hibari~the master of kittens *is bitten to death by Hibari*

Good work! More fics? :3

[reidluver]

XD Yeah, isn't that sad? Poor Hibari...just so long as he doesn't know we're saying this about him.

Awww, thanks! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

And yeah, I think that would be fun, but there was a word limit to the story and I was even pushing that. ^^; They gave me a 300 word leeway since 5,000 words was the cut-off point. I originally had like 6,000 words and they told me I couldn't have that much. Oh well.

And as for more fics...I promise there will be more! Much, much more. XD

[ekmisao]

Hell yeah Fuuta totally deserved this story. ^^v Awesome work. I most especially loved the distinction between Tsuna and Fuuta's brands of smart, semi-cowardly, wanting-to-be-brave-wanting-to-help.

And the kitten incident. And that those two understood each other about it. For the win.

[reidluver]

Yeah! Fuuta desperately needs more love in the fandom! It's so hard to find stories/fanart about the guy. ;A;

And thanks! :) Glad you caught that-I feel they're both rather similar in those respects.

Heh, I just love the dynamic of Hibari and Gokudera on a mission...and in incidences involving small, furry animals. :)