Revision RequestreimsadminApril 25 2011, 22:19:40 UTC
After reading over and discussing your application, we would like a few revisions. They are as follows:
--The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample.
* Provide a stand-alone sample of something the character would post on the Intranet that others would respond to. Please make this sample approximately 7-10 sentences long.
* You may set up a thread with another character in reimsapplicants or another musebox and link the completed sample in the application. Please note that a linked sample must still be representative of how they will communicate online. With this option, we require a minimum of 10 individual comments from the
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Sanji | One Piece | 1/who knows I wrote a thesis or something...dandywonderousApril 24 2011, 05:27:34 UTC
( fandom faculty/teacher application )
PLAYER INFORMATION PLAYER: Dandy Wonderous AGE: 19 CONTACT: AIM and e-mail: dandywonderous@hotmail.com PERSONAL LJ: dandywonderous CHARACTERS PLAYED None~
CHARACTER INFORMATION NAME: Sanji Prince CANON: One Piece CANON REFERENCE: One Piece on Wikipedia Sanji's page on the One Piece Wiki AGE: 19 (if you decide this is too young he can be aged up as much as 21 without leaving canon) GENDER Male
TENURE: First year SUBJECT/POSITION: Kitchen staff RESIDENCE: He lives in a houseboat called the Shimashima Shopping that's anchored at the dock, as okayed in the FAQ here. APPEARANCE: 5'9" (177 cm) tall, slender man with really long, hairy legs. Usually wears a suit and tie. He has blonde hair that always covers the left half of his face and a noticeably curly eyebrow. He can often be seen smoking a cigarette when off duty. PERSONALITY: Sanji’s personality when you talk to him depends largely on your gender
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Re: Sanji | One Piece | 2/? Personality contd.dandywonderousApril 24 2011, 05:29:24 UTC
Sometimes (but very rarely), Sanji comes to accept a person as something close to family, as he has Zeff and the other chefs. Women in this position get treated more or less the same, but they hold more priority over women he does not know, and will be treated with a little more respect in regards to their own abilities. Men in this position usually get treated harsher, but it is a strange, fond sort of harsh. This is because of the way Sanji was raised; taught that real men don’t show each other affection the way you show a woman affection, Sanji subconsciously associates constant fighting and insults as the male equivalent of brotherly or familial love. Of course, this is only in cases where he actually likes the person
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Sanji | One Piece | 3/? Personality end, computer and History startdandywonderousApril 24 2011, 05:31:34 UTC
Most importantly, Sanji is a dreamer. He has been since he was little and first heard the fish tales and legends of All Blue, and still is, even though he has told himself that, logically, of course these things don’t exist. It doesn’t stop him from dreaming that they do, though, and it doesn’t slow him down in his ambitions to be the world’s greatest chef.
COMPUTER APTITUDE: He is an epic fail with technology not related to cooking. Everything he touches breaks. His solution to problems involving computers is to mash every button and see what happens. He has at least figured out how to work his phone properly and can even pull off the occasional video post, but other than that he has no idea what he's doing with them. He's also one of the slowest texters ever.
AU HISTORY: Sanji was born France on March 2nd, 1991. What happened to his parents after that is unknown, but somehow, not long after, he showed up in the French foster care system. He grew up in an orphanage as a mostly normal if sometimes angry or mildly violent child. One
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Sanji | One Piece | 4/? History contd.dandywonderousApril 24 2011, 05:33:13 UTC
When Sanji woke up some time later, he found himself still alive, laying on a rock out at sea. When he sat up and looked around, he discovered, to his horror, the pirate captain sitting next to him. Zeff explained that the rock was completely barren, and the high cliff sides made going down to fish impossible, if one wanted to climb back up again. Luckily, two bags of food had washed ashore: a small one, and a very large one. Zeff told the boy to stay on this side of the rock and watch for ships, ordering that he come to the other side of the rock (where he would sit and watch) only if he saw one, and immediately when he did. With that, he picked up the biggest bag of food, causing Sanji to protest. Zeff rebutted that he had a bigger stomach, and so of course he needed more food. He told Sanji that if he ate normally, the food in the small bag would last him a week, but since he was a chef, he should be able to ration it out for at least twenty days. He pointed out that there was a pool of rainwater that he could drink from so he
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Antonio Fernandez Carriedo (Spain) | Axis Powers Hetalia | Reserved (1)freakanature88April 24 2011, 05:30:38 UTC
( faculty/teacher application )
PLAYER INFORMATION PLAYER: Frika AGE: 22 CONTACT: AIM - freakanature1988 MSN - will1775[at]msu.edu Skype - freakanature06 e-mail - freakanature06[at]sbcglobal.net PERSONAL LJ: freakanature88 CHARACTERS PLAYED: Artemis Fowl II | Artemis Fowl
CHARACTER INFORMATION NAME: Antonio Fernandez Carriedo CANON: Axis Powers Hetalia CANON REFERENCE: http://hetalia.wikia.com/wiki/Spain AGE: 25 GENDER: Male TENURE: 3 Years
SUBJECT/POSITION: Counselor RESIDENCE: At the Academy
APPEARANCE: Antonio is relatively tall, standing at 5’11” in height, and is a fairly average weight for his height. He is well-muscled, but mostly in his arms and thighs. His hair is dark brown in color, and always a complete and utter mess, falling all over his head and into his face a little bit as well. His eyes are dark green and always seem to have a sort of sparkle to them, which just matches the constant smile/grin he has on his face. When he isn’t smiling, typically Antonio is
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Antonio Fernandez Carriedo (Spain) | Axis Powers Hetalia | Reserved (2)freakanature88April 24 2011, 05:31:45 UTC
COMPUTER APTITUDE: Antonio knows how to use a computer. He can type, post, and record, but that's about it. Oh, and he can make smiley faces. So many smiley faces. :-D
AU HISTORY:Antonio was the youngest child of seven. His parents owned a small farm in a small town outside of Madrid, Spain. They were never particularly well off, but they were a happy family. The moment Antonio was old enough to start helping his father in the fields, he did. His older sisters would often play with him when he was done, though, and managed to dress him in their clothes quite frequently, and Antonio never really cared. It was always nice to spend time with any members of his family. His three older brothers were all at least ten years older than him and so had a hard time connecting with him. And, being the baby of the family, Antonio was spoiled rotten at every opportunity. At least, as rotten as his mother could manage
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Antonio Fernandez Carriedo (Spain) | Axis Powers Hetalia | Reserved (3)freakanature88April 24 2011, 05:32:21 UTC
SAMPLES INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE
A memo for all students!
Hola! It's your friendly counsellor, Antonio, with a reminder. This Thursday at 6:00pm, there will be a mandatory lecture for all students concerning safe sex! You'll learn how to use condoms properly and what birth control is all about. :-) Just remember, this is to keep you safe. Don't have sex until you're married, kids! At least, don't have sex on school property or you might get in trouble. ;-)
Here's hoping I'll see you all there! Don't be late.
-Antonio
LOG/3RD PERSON SAMPLEHumming a little, Antonio carefully set a tomato on his desk in front of himself. He studied how it was sitting for a moment and then moved it a little away from himself and looked across to the seat in front of his desk. "Perfect!" he announced aloud to nobody in particular, especially since there was nobody in the office right now anyway
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Application Accepted!reimsadminApril 26 2011, 05:13:27 UTC
Congratulations! Your application has been accepted. Please respond with your character's journal name. Once you've completed that, please join reimsacademy, reimsactivities, reimsassembly and, optionally, reimsantics.
Revision RequestreimsadminApril 25 2011, 22:23:02 UTC
After reading over and discussing your application, we would like a few revisions. They are as follows:
-The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample.
* Provide a stand-alone sample of something the character would post on the Intranet that others would respond to. Please make this sample approximately 7-10 sentences long.
* You may set up a thread with another character in reimsapplicants or another musebox and link the completed sample in the application. Please note that a linked sample must still be representative of how they will communicate online. With this option, we require a minimum of 10 individual comments from the
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Re: Revision RequestseasonofjusticeApril 25 2011, 22:29:11 UTC
Good afternoon Reims Academy, I hope you are all enjoying the new network system and the ease in which it allows you to communicate with each other as well as your teachers.
With the new system I would like to take this chance to remind everyone that we that faculty are here for your needs. And if you are ever having a problem you may come to us. Your counselor is there for you and will do what they can to help you. Even if you think your problem or question is a small one please do not hesitate in coming to us. No question is too small to be asked.
For all of my students I am always available in my office during school hours as well as after. IF you need to get a hold of me during other times you may send me a message on the network and I will make sure to reply as soon as possible.
Application Accepted!reimsadminApril 26 2011, 05:14:10 UTC
Congratulations! Your application has been accepted. Please respond with your character's journal name. Once you've completed that, please join reimsacademy, reimsactivities, reimsassembly and, optionally, reimsantics.
Revision RequestreimsadminApril 26 2011, 21:49:23 UTC
After reading over and discussing your application, we would like a few revisions. They are as follows:
-The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample.
* Provide a stand-alone sample of something the character would post on the Intranet that others would respond to. Please make this sample approximately 7-10 sentences long.
* You may set up a thread with another character in reimsapplicants or another musebox and link the completed sample in the application. Please note that a linked sample must still be representative of how they will communicate online. With this option, we require a minimum of 10 individual comments from the
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Application DeniedreimsadminMay 4 2011, 05:53:14 UTC
APPLICATION DENIED After reading over and discussing your application, we have decided that we cannot accept your application at this time for the following reasons:
The requested revisions were not completed by the one week deadline given.
We appreciate your effort and encourage you to apply for another character in the next application cycle. If you still wish to apply for this character, you may do so once more, keeping in mind the reason we are unable to accept the application as it stands now. Should a second application for this character be denied, unfortunately, we will no longer be able to accept applications from you regarding this specific character.
Thank you for your interest and we look forward to seeing your future applications.
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--The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample.
* Provide a stand-alone sample of something the character would post on the Intranet that others would respond to. Please make this sample approximately 7-10 sentences long.
* You may set up a thread with another character in reimsapplicants or another musebox and link the completed sample in the application. Please note that a linked sample must still be representative of how they will communicate online. With this option, we require a minimum of 10 individual comments from the ( ... )
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PLAYER INFORMATION
PLAYER: Dandy Wonderous
AGE: 19
CONTACT: AIM and e-mail: dandywonderous@hotmail.com
PERSONAL LJ: dandywonderous
CHARACTERS PLAYED None~
CHARACTER INFORMATION
NAME: Sanji Prince
CANON: One Piece
CANON REFERENCE: One Piece on Wikipedia
Sanji's page on the One Piece Wiki
AGE: 19 (if you decide this is too young he can be aged up as much as 21 without leaving canon)
GENDER Male
TENURE: First year
SUBJECT/POSITION: Kitchen staff
RESIDENCE: He lives in a houseboat called the Shimashima Shopping that's anchored at the dock, as okayed in the FAQ here.
APPEARANCE: 5'9" (177 cm) tall, slender man with really long, hairy legs. Usually wears a suit and tie. He has blonde hair that always covers the left half of his face and a noticeably curly eyebrow. He can often be seen smoking a cigarette when off duty.
PERSONALITY: Sanji’s personality when you talk to him depends largely on your gender ( ... )
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COMPUTER APTITUDE: He is an epic fail with technology not related to cooking. Everything he touches breaks. His solution to problems involving computers is to mash every button and see what happens. He has at least figured out how to work his phone properly and can even pull off the occasional video post, but other than that he has no idea what he's doing with them. He's also one of the slowest texters ever.
AU HISTORY: Sanji was born France on March 2nd, 1991. What happened to his parents after that is unknown, but somehow, not long after, he showed up in the French foster care system. He grew up in an orphanage as a mostly normal if sometimes angry or mildly violent child. One ( ... )
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PLAYER INFORMATION
PLAYER: Frika
AGE: 22
CONTACT:
AIM - freakanature1988
MSN - will1775[at]msu.edu
Skype - freakanature06
e-mail - freakanature06[at]sbcglobal.net
PERSONAL LJ: freakanature88
CHARACTERS PLAYED:
Artemis Fowl II | Artemis Fowl
CHARACTER INFORMATION
NAME: Antonio Fernandez Carriedo
CANON: Axis Powers Hetalia
CANON REFERENCE: http://hetalia.wikia.com/wiki/Spain
AGE: 25
GENDER: Male
TENURE: 3 Years
SUBJECT/POSITION: Counselor
RESIDENCE: At the Academy
APPEARANCE: Antonio is relatively tall, standing at 5’11” in height, and is a fairly average weight for his height. He is well-muscled, but mostly in his arms and thighs. His hair is dark brown in color, and always a complete and utter mess, falling all over his head and into his face a little bit as well. His eyes are dark green and always seem to have a sort of sparkle to them, which just matches the constant smile/grin he has on his face. When he isn’t smiling, typically Antonio is ( ... )
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AU HISTORY:Antonio was the youngest child of seven. His parents owned a small farm in a small town outside of Madrid, Spain. They were never particularly well off, but they were a happy family. The moment Antonio was old enough to start helping his father in the fields, he did. His older sisters would often play with him when he was done, though, and managed to dress him in their clothes quite frequently, and Antonio never really cared. It was always nice to spend time with any members of his family. His three older brothers were all at least ten years older than him and so had a hard time connecting with him. And, being the baby of the family, Antonio was spoiled rotten at every opportunity. At least, as rotten as his mother could manage ( ... )
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INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE
A memo for all students!
Hola! It's your friendly counsellor, Antonio, with a reminder. This Thursday at 6:00pm, there will be a mandatory lecture for all students concerning safe sex! You'll learn how to use condoms properly and what birth control is all about. :-) Just remember, this is to keep you safe. Don't have sex until you're married, kids! At least, don't have sex on school property or you might get in trouble. ;-)
Here's hoping I'll see you all there! Don't be late.
-Antonio
LOG/3RD PERSON SAMPLEHumming a little, Antonio carefully set a tomato on his desk in front of himself. He studied how it was sitting for a moment and then moved it a little away from himself and looked across to the seat in front of his desk. "Perfect!" he announced aloud to nobody in particular, especially since there was nobody in the office right now anyway ( ... )
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Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to role-playing with you!
Position: Guidance Counselor (Middle School)
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-The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample.
* Provide a stand-alone sample of something the character would post on the Intranet that others would respond to. Please make this sample approximately 7-10 sentences long.
* You may set up a thread with another character in reimsapplicants or another musebox and link the completed sample in the application. Please note that a linked sample must still be representative of how they will communicate online. With this option, we require a minimum of 10 individual comments from the ( ... )
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With the new system I would like to take this chance to remind everyone that we that faculty are here for your needs. And if you are ever having a problem you may come to us. Your counselor is there for you and will do what they can to help you. Even if you think your problem or question is a small one please do not hesitate in coming to us. No question is too small to be asked.
For all of my students I am always available in my office during school hours as well as after. IF you need to get a hold of me during other times you may send me a message on the network and I will make sure to reply as soon as possible.
Thank you, and have a good day.
Eiki Shiki, Counselor.
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Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to role-playing with you!
Position: Guidance Counselor (High School)
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-The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample.
* Provide a stand-alone sample of something the character would post on the Intranet that others would respond to. Please make this sample approximately 7-10 sentences long.
* You may set up a thread with another character in reimsapplicants or another musebox and link the completed sample in the application. Please note that a linked sample must still be representative of how they will communicate online. With this option, we require a minimum of 10 individual comments from the ( ... )
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APPLICATION DENIED
After reading over and discussing your application, we have decided that we cannot accept your application at this time for the following reasons:
- The requested revisions were not completed by the one week deadline given.
We appreciate your effort and encourage you to apply for another character in the next application cycle. If you still wish to apply for this character, you may do so once more, keeping in mind the reason we are unable to accept the application as it stands now. Should a second application for this character be denied, unfortunately, we will no longer be able to accept applications from you regarding this specific character.Thank you for your interest and we look forward to seeing your future applications.
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