spur of the moment fic...

[relinquished972]

Title: Standstill
Author: relinquished972 
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters/Pairings: Tezuka, Fuji, mentions of Atobe and Inui, past Tezuka/Fuji
Rating: G/PG-13
Genre: Angst/Romance
Warnings: shounen-ai
Summary: He felt as if his life were at a standstill.  He was, after all, the ex-boyfriend who didn't know how to let go.

Comments

[bombaygin]

D: D: D: That is so sad. Poor love-lorn Tezuka. I could never get behind the Fuji/Tezuka ship, but perhaps this is why. BECAUSE FUJI IS EVIL. ;D hahaha... But really, this is very good. I can totally stand behind a hurt, forsaken Tezuka any day. And you wrote him very well in his quiet hurt.

I also love how Atobe is really the only one to notice it. He gets Tezuka.

[relinquished972]

Thank you for the comment! I was originally going to make this Tezuka/Fuji, but I've always thought that Fuji would be more likely to have clear reactions to people he likes and people he dislikes. It's not so much that he is EVIL, just that he doesn't want to give people the wrong impression that he likes them when, in fact, he doesn't.

And the Atobe-cameo was there because yes, he does understand Tezuka more than most of the characters in the series and because he seems the type to have an opinion on everything xD

[lovefujitez]

Ouch! Poor Tezuka, that surely is a painful spot to be in, where Fuji just find him as an annoying ex. I hope the relationship could still be saved down the road. Tezuka needs to make the move if he thinks Fuji is the one for him.

I like it, I look forward to a continuation.

Thank you for sharing.

[relinquished972]

Yes, the "annoying ex" role is a hard one to be forced into. Sometimes you just can't help it because you're so in love with the person that you do things and unconsciously react to them. I don't really know how the relationship will turn out (I haven't given it much thought), but Fuji's personality tells me that the result would probably be less than optimistic ^_^;;

Thanks for the comment!

[ii_crack]

Beautiful ;__;"

[relinquished972]

Thank you! <3

[minidrag33]

Very well written.

[relinquished972]

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed!

[mitsu_syusuke]

this is sad..poor Tezuka..
I like Atobe's insight and can see through Tezuka. because Ore-sama is amazing like that! XD

ivy

[relinquished972]

Yeah *sigh*. I was afraid Tezuka would be seen as too OOC, but I'm glad he turned out alright in the end. And Atobe is amazing, period. =D

Thank you!