JUst a poem..

Feb 06, 2006 15:47


He promised her the world,

told her i swore theres no more lies,

his words put her at ease and silenced all of her cries,

he promised his love,adn said Id do anything for you,

she smiled brushed his face and said she never knew,

she was young and naive believin everything he said,

never knowing the truth it would kill her in the end,

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kaybaby08 February 6 2006, 21:31:04 UTC
My god.

a) wow.
b) if you wrote that... double wow.
c) once again.. made me cry.

♥ ya girl

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relkoolkid08 February 6 2006, 22:54:22 UTC
A)thanks
B) yea i wrote that
c) im sorry it made you cry
D) i love you..

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picklejuice10 February 6 2006, 23:27:34 UTC
omg...that's so good korey..

but hey ..I really have to talk to you...really bad...like a serious talk...

♥ ♥ ♥

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relkoolkid08 February 7 2006, 01:16:33 UTC
really why? whats goin on.. well dont tell me on here... but ill prolly see you at the game tomorrow ok man now you are makin me anxious..

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jizzle86 February 7 2006, 05:03:47 UTC
...............................really?

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relkoolkid08 February 7 2006, 11:51:22 UTC
really... shut up.. i told you it wasnt about you.. ok it was just a random poem that i happened to write ok.. yup.. much love my nigga..

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