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[and so, the sphere clicks on, accidentally it would seem]

-- the hell! Ow!

What happened to that thing... you know-- gravity!

I think I'm gonna be sick...

(ooc; Intro-post for Luke!)

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Guy's gone...

Well, his stuff is, anyway.

But it's better. He should be in Auldurant. They need him more than I do...

Damn, but I'm still gonna miss him...

Ouch-- that.. That... Just ouch!

[Luke looks up]

I'm back... I don't know how but I am...!

I... I'm so sorry anyone had to see that...

Um... Tear...?

I... um...

Do you want to...

I mean... I have a question for you.

TEAR IS HERE!

Damn it... I enjoyed having a family, but I don't want to forget the people who are already close to me.

GUY! Where the hell are you!?

Why didn't you recognize my hair, Guy...?

[jkshfsf SECOND TIME WITH FAILING TO COOK IN AS MANY DAYS]

A-augh! I think we left the oven on too high!

[Luke is seriously scared to look inside the oven. Poor, trashed, oven]

Oh Lorelei, this stuff stinks!

[Luke. Is covered in flour, and he looks like he's been trying to do something, and has finally given in]

... Can someone help me make something?