[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 3

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 3/?
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's betrayed

Comments

[every_journal]

Omo! Update! I'm gonna read it after my shower k?

[every_journal]

[rennie_88]

lololol omg~ taht gif is amazing and awesome and hilarious XD lol! how can their mouths be so large? XDD

hehe yes! lots of drama happening~ and more drama, angst, love to come, because this is only the beginning!!! :D

thanks for reading & commenting!! (and thx for the gif LOL its so saved to my harddrive)

[rennie_88]

huu yes, betrayal is some of the best angst ~ :)
some of ur questions will be answered next chap, and some will be a long time coming until they're actually explained fully :P hoho
:) thank u for reading! and leaving ur thoughts <3 all ur questions help me check that i didn't miss or leave out important information and i really appreciate that! :B

[toni_luv]

DO YOU HONESTLY KNOW HOW MANY IDEAS ARE RUNNING THROUGH MY HEAD PICTURING THE SORCERER AND HIS APPRENTICE?! Not only that!! The twisting plot just popped in! Getting really excited imagining this! Ooww! Owwww!! oOOOWW! Lawly! Lawly! That conniving duckbutt!!! I hope the royal family sent a portrait picture to that alliance fam who they expecting to see. "Who is this?" --- 'prince kim' ---- "Prince Kim?? You show no resemblance to Prince Shim" Dunt dunt dunnnn!!! LOL. This is going to be interesting experience dark path Changmin walks upon. In hopes Changmin will take upon learning few tricks....I hope! I dream to see. Slight vengeance against the betrayal men! Junsu shaking his head like a lunatic "Get out of my mmmiiiiinDDDDDDDD!!!!" ---- mind invasion.. 'Not until you tell them who I really am...' purring growl end..... hidden beneath the dark cloak. *jumps in seat*

[rennie_88]

do you know how many ideas are stampeding in my head too?? XDDDD hehehehe believe me, this is only the tip of the iceberg omg -0- its growing big and ugly like the hulk and i cant control it ~ lol

hehe and no worries~~ even though he'll get away with it for now, evil duckbutt will get spanked so bad for his crimes later..cough i mean.. he'll get punished XP

[ebbie28]

I really like this fic a lot and Junsu man you really did the worst betrayal ever.. My theory on this is that Sorcerer is JJ but he is able to clock himself so no one knows he is the real one.. LOL just my theory but i can't wait for the next chapter..

[rennie_88]

hehehe ur theory is very interesting actually :P and jaejoong is definitely not what he seems ~~~ *winkwink*
betrayal is the worst :( i really plunged poor changmin into miserable angst :S but he's gona have lovely jaechun to sweep him off his feet~ lol

[n3uromanc3r]

Now we met Jaejoong but I'm really curious who the other person was... Yoochun or not? But maybe Yoochun is the prince...

And Junsu's behaviour scares me. How could he? And won't be suspicious that it's a prince Junsu suddenly instead of prince Changmin? Did they planning on telling the King later that after the tragic death of Changmin they have to improvise - in order not to dishonour the country in front of the neighbouring King they had to use Junsu as substitute?

I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so curious about Changmin's life with those mysterious creatures!

[rennie_88]

uh you'll see.. hope its not a let down LOL ~ XD

-0- ahg, i just simply made it that they didn't know eachother's names TT..cuz i thot it would be too confusing to have junsu pretending his name was changmin and everyone calling and thinking of him as changmin :S and using junsu as a pretend substitute wouldn't work either because there's another reason why i ddidn't want them to know each other's names for something that happens later :P
hu,, too many ideas and options to chose from X_X

more's coming soon! and thank u for leaving ur thoughts, it really helps me double check that all the facts line up and dont have any too large of plot holes :') <3