[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 3

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 3/?
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's betrayed

Comments

[ita90]

They betray him! Junsu betrayed him! This bastards!
But this magician and his 'slave'? Wooo just wuuaaa! The hooded one was Jae right? Right? :D
I hope they will not do experiment on Changmin, he need to kill this bastards who betray him first xD

[rennie_88]

hehehe angst right from the beginning :P ~
yep, jae was all hiding in his hood lol and there's a reason for it too ~ :)
and they didn't take changminnie by accident~ but he's gona have to suffer for a bit beffore he gets some happy time :(
and im sorry the bastards will get away with this for a while for the sake of plot lol TTTTTTTTT!!

[ita90]

Angst but he was rescued so it's ok? Even if there will be some angst there later too xD
You make me all exited for next chapter(s) I can't wait for more :D

[rennie_88]

hehehe yes! angst is only worth it if there's a happy ending :)
thank u! next chaptr this weekend ~~

[dreaming_col]

Ohmygosh, Ren, this fic... Absolutely insane~!! In a good way, of course. Just... wow. T_T (And just to warn you, I will soooooo be badgering you for answers/info when we get together this weekend. I will pester you until you HAVE to tell me. *nods* I need to know what's going on~~!! XD)

[rennie_88]

aww thx so much for saying that T^T means a lot coming from you miss-amazing-writer lol

hahahaha~ omg tho....the more i write the more complicated and WEIRD its getting and wana make sure i dont post a part before im sure thats what's supposed to happen -0- its killing my brain lol !!

mmmmmmm well, if u like to have spoilers...u can attempt to figure out this huge messy thing with me LOL or else im gona have to seal my lips :S ~ actually.. i kinda feel like they're already sealed -ㅂ-!!! *evil vibes*

[dreaming_col]

Oh, I totally understand all about a fic running away from you. (*coughs*Possession*coughs*) And DBtT/GBtR was actually only supposed to be one story instead of two, but that kinda went crazy all over, too.

I definitely do not mind spoilers, so you better get those lips UNsealed. XPPPP Seriously, though, there's this cafe near my apartment I've been wanting to try out, so maybe we can go there, get some coffee, and both do some fic brainstorming with each. I love talking about fics, either my own or other people's. ^_^

[rennie_88]

one story becoming two........ such a NIGHTMARE OMFG o_o i cant even imagine -0- i cant even finish even one story yet lmao XDDD *passes out* tho i guess thats why ur stuck now? :(

omg!!!!!!!!!!! thats actually a super super good idea ! esp for the stories that are stuck in the mud -0- we never know what random conversation might cause inspiration to strike :D and im coffee deprived these days so my eyes are like glazing over...want it to be sat already ugh...(we shud have thot of this sooner lmao)

[harunotenshi]

i really hate junsu right now. how could he do that to changmin? TT____________TT what's in it for him if he betrays changmin? i have other speculations but my hate for what junsu did is overlapping them.

jaejoong. changmin finally meets jaejoong. but his voice got taken away...and just who was that sorcerer?

please update again soon!

[rennie_88]

:( there's actually a lot in it for bad little junsu ..but he can only get away with it for only so long :P (and he'll have to be punished for his crime, wont he? *evil laugh*)

more coming soon~ <3 :)

[yakuso5u]

THIS IS MAGIC HAHAHAHAHA!!! *crazy laugh*
Lol omg I'm so so so happy and excited that you're writing a story like this @@ (and I'm really glad to see so many people commenting on it ^^)

I have so many things to say it's awful... >.<
But FIRST: how did you KNOW that mute Changmin is like my forever flying #1 on "vulnerable Minnie" scale!! :o Are you on earth to make my dreams come true? *cries*
For a while I was worried that they'd REALLY cut his tongue and I was already getting my tentacles prepared for the gross... and I got a kiss (JaeMin kiss?) instead, so it's like, perfection~ (though Min might disagreee :p).

The Big Bad Guy... is he Chunnie? Lol omg I have images of Snape in my head, and is it that dark aura but with the handsome as a (nice nice nice) bonus?! See, I've already decided who's who... I'll sound stupid if I'm wrong but you won't blame me for getting over-excited okay? ^^

Won't even talk about Su and that bunch of despicable crazy guys with him. >.Min sounds so helpless yet struggling through it all... that's

[rennie_88]

why are u crazy laughing?????????? hahaha you're so great <3 ( im also surprised there seem to be a lot more ppl who like fantasy than i thot :D it should be done MOREEEE *hinthint**nudgenudge*)

omgg are u serious??????????? :O :O :O! i have a thing about mute or gone blind or otherwise helpless and handicapped tooooooo XDD cuz its sooo soo V!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lolol (that sounds like some kinda drug now). tho we need to stop being so surprised with our horrible twin tendencies lol XDD just accept each other as carbon copies of the sister-stars <3

[yakuso5u]

Seems like you brought to the surface the sleeping of love of many people for fantasy XD *claps* (I'm crazy laughing cos I'm happyyyy~ :p)

The V-thing is amaziiing *___* I like blind and handicapped too and omg is it a cliché thing after all??!! Lol I feel bad for saying things like that... *begs for Min's forgiveness*
I agree, disfiguring is too hard (cos they are so beautiful that it'd be a crime to damage them, even in a story lol!! So we need to resort to helpless-but-beautiful strategies like the mute!! XD)

I literally laughed out loud at the sharing grease thing LOL! *hits self* I can see Chun and Snape sharing evil greasy plots together around a cup of... banana juice (cos they are in the jungle ofc), and then Min comes in and Chunnie goes all greasy and big-loving-eyes and Snape errr... he celebrates the wedding????!!! Lol omg what am I saying >.Internal struggle is good~ It's what makes you love a character, cos it makes them more... human, I guess

[rennie_88]

(aiyaa TT wrote big reply and then internet closed and its all eraseeedd TT)

huu but i wish there would be a fantasy boom..and recently i've also been wanting more HS fics too.... so it only means we need our HPSK to become a realityy T^T maybe we shud put a request up lol ~

oily snape blessing yoomin's wedding in the jungle?? LOLOL! of all things..gona bet me high on v so quickly lol ~ tho i totally agree.. if ppl deform characters in their stories i always pretend i didnt read that part and just keep imagining them all perfect XD haha

hmmm tormented personalities.. kekekeke sounds very angsty :) maybe its cuz we're girls who just love drama haha! tho greek mythology.. is a good topic :P i shudnt even begin thinking abt it yet tho -0- ur tickling my tentacles AGAIN! haha

magical love T^T its magical in my head..but..don't know how it will turn out hehe u kno wat i mean ~

ahah omg if u say it that way then im getting nervous~ dont want to disappoint youuu T^T haha~ need to get all serious about this noww grr D: !!! hehe

[rennie_88]

oops! lj messed up the format! link to next chapter is already upp :)

thank u so much for dropping a comment <3 <3 dont worry, i will gi ve poor minnie a happy ending ~ :P

someone once told me one way to improve your writing is to read many different things more and a LOT :)

[rennie_88]

haha :) thank u so much <3
huuu..tho happy ending is kinda far away...not sure but this looks like its gona be kinda long..20 chapters or something X.X
im just curious when/how u started reading fics then?? :) (and everything + anything is made better if our boys are there, right?? kekekekeke)