[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 11

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 11/?
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's

Comments

[n3uromanc3r]

I really like how the things between Changmin and Jae started to change, although I don't know what caused this change, how Changmin's power got this strong when Jae was sure the other was already dead and avoided to visit him not to face his dead body, and when he finally gathered enough courage he found Changmin not only alive but his wound also healed!

And also Jaejoong feeling desperate when he thought after the wonder of finding the other alive he killed him with his greedy actions was really touching! I liked how he called the other by his name for the first time!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

[rennie_88]

jaemin's relationship is a very slowly changing process and it still has a ways to go x_x !!

updated finally~~ though next chapter is all about yoomin :S!! :)

thank u always for following the story and reading commenting <3 <3 <3 ~~~~~~

[rennie_88]

helloooo <3 i'm sorry it took me so long to reply. i always want to give replies to your comments a lot of time and thought cuz you always share so many ideas etc in ur comments

[rennie_88]

alkjsfljsaflkasjdflkjs kyaaa~~ im so happy to read this comment cuz you totally just got everything!! all the whole point of jaemin and their separate characters and roles. and the effect they have on each other and why. seriously you put it all into words what i had to show through pages and pages of descriptions and writing lol xD

[shameless_muse]

Woah... This was exactly the moment I was waiting for >:D!
Love the fact that Minnie (finally) is developing Stockholm syndrome
Well, it was about time, I'd say >__>

PS: two days ago, when I opened lj and saw you updated, I was all smiles
:DDD

[rennie_88]

yaaay! i know jaemin has been moving very slowly, but it will suddenly pick up and go crazy in a few chapters :P

updated finally! sorry for the long wait as usual TT !though next part is all about yoomin ~~

thank u for sticking with the story and reading commenting <3 <3 really appreciate it ~

[yakuso5u]

Woooooow...!!! You decided to bless us with intense updates??!! *excited and happy and omg how am I going to sleep after that? XDD

Changmin... I don't know where he still finds willpower amidst all that. Or rather, it's not exactly his own will. Just instinctive reactions to what he knows will hurt or violate him, and lingering determination... I don't think he even remembers why he should resist in the first place, too broken and omg ;___; THAT'S V-MIN \o/ *runs away*
It must be horrible, the feeling of being stalked and observed avery minute of the day and even in your own thoughts... no wonder his sanity is on the verge of breaking too :s Jae effortlessly wins #1 in creeper category O____O

And now Changmin is already starting to feel those two oppopsite flows... feelings he doesn't want to feel, and the beginning of something that hasn't be given a chance to grow (yet XDDDD

[rennie_88]

oh my dear. when are either of our updates not intense? :S hehehe nothing is simple or bland for our toes