Comments | rennie_88: [Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 11

rennie_88

[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 11

Dec 04, 2012 18:25

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin
Length: Chapter 11/?
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's ( Read more... )

genre: romance, pairing: jaemin, title: moon ballad, genre: fantasy, pairing: yoomin, genre: drama, rating: pg-13, genre: au, author: r, genre: angst, length: chapter

Comments 27

dreaming_col December 12 2012, 14:16:56 UTC

Oh, Changminnie.

And oh, JaeJae...

And just... oh, this fic~! *sighs*

(In other notes: You need to tell me when you post a new chap, child~! I bug you whenever I update; you should do the same! Otherwise I go a week and a half without checking LJ and almost miss it. T_T)

rennie_88 January 29 2013, 07:49:57 UTC

(lmao i'mm telling u i updated now XD oh my gosh. its like 2 months again..boo.. i dont even kno what this is i wrote it last night when i was half asleep.....maybe thats why its so long and rambly haha =.=)

ita90 December 14 2012, 17:39:41 UTC

omg! This chapter is amazing! You wrote it so good I could cry and Jaemin interaction was wow!
You wrote everything in details. Looks like Jae isn't nothing for Min.
I love the ending, it was pure magic. Min wake humanity side inside Jaejoong or something like that. They have a connection too. I can't wait for next chapter I hope Min will be fine, I was worried that he would die (even if he is main character xD) but Jae saved him somehow XD
Really great chapter maybe because it was full of Jaemin? xD
BTW; What is your secret to write so good? I'm bad writer :(

rennie_88 January 29 2013, 07:52:33 UTC

awwee thank you TT it really encourages me a lot!! i'm happy you liked it and hope you like the next chapters too <3

updated now!! jaemin's connection will go on hold for a chapter though cuz theres is yoomin time next :P

(no secret ~ just practice writing a lot and edit/rewrite over and over...and also reading other novels all the time helps ur brain remember writing styles :)!! fighting!)

ita90 February 7 2013, 18:34:31 UTC

^^ no problem ^^

I don't mind ^^ I like all pairings in his fic now (but still Jaemin fav XD)

thanks ^^ I will try this 'no secret' thing XD

rennie_88 February 9 2013, 12:07:49 UTC

i know exactly haha! i'll get distracted by other pairings but as soon as i see jaemin i just melt and they are too perfect alskdfjsldkj T^T soulfighers go go !

dont worry that ur writing is bad or not, just write whatever you want :)

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rennie_88 January 30 2013, 14:33:38 UTC

oh gosh i feel so bad about the length sometimes TT it makes me think i should edit a lot more out before sharing cuz i think it gets tooooo detailed and repetitive a lot.. sigh but then it would never get posted cuz it would never be perfect XDD sighhh ( ... )

harunotenshi December 28 2012, 20:20:46 UTC

his was long and a bit confusing but then towards the end i began to understand it a bit... just what did jaejoong and his evil father do to changmin? what else did jaejoong do to him unconsciously? what happens when the full moon comes? what will happen to yoochun?

i still hate junsu but i want to know why he did what he did to changmin...

update again soon!

rennie_88 January 29 2013, 07:54:16 UTC

i'm sorry. i know my writing is always confusing but i just make it up as i go so it turns out that way :S !! hopefully your questions will be answered soon in other chapters !

thank you for following the story and reading and commenting <3 i really appreciate it :)

updated finally~ go go yoomin :P