[Fic] Dare you to move : three

[rennie_88]

Title: Dare you to Move
Pairing: Jaemin
Length: Chapter 3/10
Genre: high school AU,angst,drama
Warnings: bullying. bullying
(Plz don't hate/bash me, there has to be excessive bullying for there to be a bodyguard. :P)

Story request by rikuma, i hope you like it! <3
Summary : Changmin is the loser who everyone bullies at school. He's also the only son of

Comments

[dreaming_col]

MinSu's first meeting is so... T_^ (Melody and I made up that emoticon when we needed something happy and sad at the same time... XD) It was depressing, having them both get bullied within hearing distance of each other. But the ending and Su's greeting and such were cute~~ So, yes, completely deserving of a T_^.

And Jae shows up next chap, yes?? Assuming we'll see the breaking point that makes Jae's presence a requirement first, and then Jae will come in after that. Can't wait to see it~~! XD

[rennie_88]

hahaha thats perfect for the way the 4 year olds express their emotions these days "i'm happy angry" tho this one is "i'm happy sad" i guess LOL which doesnt make any sense XD
it sorta seemed fitting that they'd meet like that tho since i made them the bullied pair :( *squishes minsu*

yeah im so happy to finally get to the jaemin *_* cuz its like STILL not there yet in any of the other jaemin im writing lmao gona make it faster in this story at least -0-

[dreaming_col]

Ahh, that's gonna be mine and Melody's new tagline: The BrainTwins - perfect for 4-year-olds. XDDD
It really was the most appropriate meeting for them. Sad, but appropriate. And Junsu's still sunshine. ^^

Lmao~!!! Oh, it's so true. You do take your sweet time getting to the romance in any of your stuff. And I thought I was bad in DBtT with YooMin... O_O

[rennie_88]

hahahaha 4 year olds will flock to join :P

junsu sunshine image is like.. made out of bubbles *_* so cutie ~

haha i know *deflate* its that stupid part inside thats like.. its not realistic if its too fast.. when the whole story itself is already unrealistic x_x....yeah i do appreciate all the yoomin love you gave us so far <3 !

[harunotenshi]

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changmin got hurt again... these bullies are really just mean. i wanna go and punch them all in the face tbh.

it was good of yoochun to realize that changmin was lying to him... well... for the years he's been changmin's bodyguard and all...

and then there's junsu. they met under the worst of circumstances but at least he's the first real friend that changmin has gotten... ever! but why was junsu being bullied as well?

hope you update soon! and i'm already excited to see how jaejoong will make his appearance in the fourth chapter~XDDDDDDD

[rennie_88]

u only want to let them go after punching? :P i shud make jae kick their butts hehe!

yoochun has watched min grow up so he has to know him pretty well ...plus changmin kinda sucks at lying XD haha

yep i'll mention why junsu's bullied in the next chapter ~:) i love minsuuuu :3

i'm almost ready to post ch 4 ,just once i end the scene ~ go go go!

[melati_a]

Err... if you don't mind me asking, Junsu is changmin's friend from his old school, right? why do they meet again now?

[rennie_88]

i'm sorry for the confusion! the first scene with junsu is actually from the new school present time - and then i had gone back in time to explain his childhood/middleschool experience TT i'm sorry its not clear ~ i will edit it :)
thank u for asking! i hopee u like the story <3

[melati_a]

Oh, I get it now, so the end-half of ch1, ch2, and ch3 is a actually a long, long flashback. thanks for the explanation.

[rennie_88]

yep exactly! i'm glad it makes sense toyou now phew ~ :B

[yakuso5u]

The YooMin... *throws ♥♥ all over the place* Ofc Minnie would have a massive crush on his handsome bodyguard, young heart and all (uhuh Jae come here quick cos I'm already rooting for YooMin XDDDD *hopeless*)
But I can see how painful it must be for Min... feeling lower than everyone around him, including the people he'd like to make proud or happy -> Chunnie and his parents.
Ofc he's constantly on the defensive... self-depreciation at its worst, but how could it be otherwise? >_<

And I'm happy to see that Min's parents are AT LEAST on his side. Feared for a while that they'd blame him or something, but at least he has a 'preserved' part of his life. And I think it's a good thing that they know what he's facing... maybe not everything, or not how far it goes, but at least they are aware that Changmin is being bullied. I think it'd be ten times worse if he was trying to hide that fact from them and Yoochun >_< He isn't completely 'alone

[rennie_88]

*GRIN* minnnie crushing on older chun is too irresistible <3 <3 <3 but he's like..uh 10 sthg years older than him and thats too big of a gap for me XD so min will just need to fall in real love with someone his own age :P

yeah hes kinda a weakling mess now but there r plans for joongie to sorta try to um dare i say 'train' him ? ^^; and heal the insecure vulnerable part inside *squealing in jaemin formation*

yeah.. i couldn't make him have trouble at home cuz that would be like overkill on depressing angst and he'd just like keel over and die TT and bullying is bad enough on its own sigh poor chun knows tho and cant do much abt it ~ yoomin dynamics are supposed to be subtle so i hope i can show it correctly !

minsu <3 i really dno how to write them but they r just too cute in my head *_*

hahaha! its ok i'll finish chp 5 after all the in law stuuff this weekend and post hopefully sunday or sthg ~~~
dang u always know how my tentacles work too well LOL of course jaechun tension :P *skipping around jaechunmin*

[yakuso5u]

But I think that age gap is fine... *pouts* (thats like... one of V-Min ingredients :P). But I understand what you mean here...YooMin are close but their relationship already settled in a protecting/protected way that doesnt leave much place for something balanced to grow ^^ (I shouldnt be doing complicated couple analysis at 3 in the morning... please dont mind me if what I'm writing doesnt make sense XD)
(but wait... maybe you wrote it and in that case I'm sorry I forgot, but how old is Jae supposed to be here??)

TRAINING UHUH. Back to lame daydreaming as in chapter 4. I'll spare you this one :P

I'm reallyyyyyyy relieved Min can find solace at home. Too much isnt good, especially in that HS setting where there are hormones and overreating teenagers everwhere :P
As for YooMin.... *grabs popcorn and makes herself comfortable on comfy sofa in Chunnie bubble*. I'M WAITING *grins* XD

[miruu_kira]

i know i should've check lj more often now, bad me i'm so late,

owwwwie!! Big brother chunnie!!! I'm sure from the deep of his heart chun loves changminnie like his own brother right??
At least they're little yoomin there, wkwkwk, and yaaaaaaaay for that, *hugs u, kissu min ~~

i'm sure min's father did something right?? He won't let min get any harm again?? But why that damn his classmates still after him?? They really piss me,
still can't believe they're a high schooler student as cruel as them,

dolphiiin!!
He got bullied too, *hugs junsu, junsu is a commoner here??
At least min got a friend!!
Yaaaaay, for minsu friendship!

[rennie_88]

ur not late ~ :) its always here waiting for you whenever u have the time haha

of course chunnie cares for min way too much <3 *_* little yoomin makes it all better and sweet right?

yeah cruel students are really horrible :( its too sad that its like that in real life..and in real life no body guards to save the poor bullied kids TTTTTTTTTTTTT JOONGIE HURRIE UP! kk

junsu's the commoner genius hehe i think minsu are the cutest friends :) right?

[miruu_kira]

i'm still can't forget my stupidness, really feels embarassed with you so mucchh, TT.TT

i agree, minsu always be the cutest bestfriend ever, take care each other and thats so sweet, :))
yep, unluckily in the real, we can't have a cool and gorgeus bodyguards like jaechun, hehheheehe

[rennie_88]

omgosh u are too cute *squishes* really calm down hehehehe we are all friends here :P

theres not much minsu around on livejournal..but they are freaking adorable and special hehe
yeah its true.. in real life poor jaechun are the ones who need body guards :( *feels guilty for dreaming about stalking them*