[Fic] Dare you to move : five

[rennie_88]

Title: Dare you to Move
Pairing: Jaemin
Length: Chapter 5/10
Genre: high school AU,angst,drama
Warnings: bullying. light language
(Plz don't hate/bash me, there has to be excessive bullying for there to be a bodyguard. :P)
Story request by rikuma, i hope you like it! <3

Summary : Changmin is the loser who everyone bullies at school. He's also the only son of

Comments

[harunotenshi]

changmin really thought that jaejoong would be like everyone else in school (except for junsu) and try to bully him and belittle him... it was a pleasant surprise that jaejoong uttered the words I'm not here to hurt you.

in changmin's shock he kind of missed jaejoong's muttered sentence~^^ but at least it's a clue for min to look forward to. there's one less person out there to hurt him.

will yunho be part of this story as well? since yoochun and changmin had made their appearances followed by junsu and jaejoong... yunho will be appearing as well right?

update again soon!

[rennie_88]

heellooo! :) long time no see TT hehe i'm sorry it took forever to reply to your comment ~ and forever to update again TT but always love and appreciate your comments! <3 thank u so much for reading every time :D

anyway~ the story continues at last ~ XD and yes, yunho will show up later tho he's not such a big character~ :)

[yakuso5u]

AHSDFHSLJKGQ

I think I'm gonna re-read this tonight, under blankets, with the grudge-thing out and imagining everything that could be going through Jae's head and all further JaeMin interactions... you are awesome, you know that??

Cos high school stories with bullying are like... plenty, and you're totally bringing into a new light.
Instead of poor, friendless Minnie, we have him with a friend, someone he admires and who cares about him, and a loving family. Instead of the bad, mean bully who turns from cruel to understanding, we have Jaejoong who won't hurt, but won't pity Min either. It's like... so new, wow. I reaaaaaaally can't wait to see where this is going...

The whole JaeMin was so damn intense, be it the first or the last part... at least, it's good that Changmin is aware that his instinctive reactions are wrong when it comes to interacting with others... like running away or seeing every word in the darkest possible light. I hope Jaejoong can help him open his eyes on that soon

[rennie_88]

*dead* oh my. its been so long i forgot how hefty and well done our spam is

[yakuso5u]

IT'S 2 AM AND I'M DOING IT GIRL!!! XDDD

Finally going to run to next update, so I'm kinda crazy impatient after all this time spent delaying!!! (even if I know that's my fault and I'm horrible >_<). So kinda trying to hold back the grudge just the time to answer (cos I re-read chap. 5 and it's even more amazing than what I remember... woow. Really missed that @@)

I just need to read into things XD Like... it's not fun if I can't enjoy myself with extra complicated theories and all. Is that weird? :P But at least, looks like I'm not too off the mark XD

[rennie_88]

reading into things and then gushing is our specialties hehe we get it from lack of oxygen by living in the chunnie bubble. too bad for our brains but we're too far gone to know something is wrong lol ~

ur so right. minsu would be such a challenge..the only stories i read when they were in character it always turned out bittersweet and not exactly a happy ending ..or it was so vague like they had something and then it just never got a proper chance... minsu is so cute tho -0-!! but still.. we need jaemin/yoomin/homin finished up first heheh if thats ever possible

oh my gosh i need help with element~ i dno if it shud be homin or jaemin and then i dno if i shud make the 'evil' character into an original character so as to not repeat evil joongie or evili yunho? TT help meeee ~ hahahaha ill give you more secretly as reward :D

'grudge is free' had my head echoing with "SMEOGOL IS FREEEEE!" hahahahahaha XD *dead*

[n3uromanc3r]

I love this chapter so much! All the emotions, the pace, everything! I saw someone complained about too much description and little part of action, and I disagree! It was perfect, they just met, Jae can't rush things because it would attract even more unwanted attention to poor Changmin! And first he needs to know what the exact situation is about this case and he needs to be careful neither the bad guys nor Changmin can't suspect he's not a real - average - student and especially that he's only there to protect Changmin

[rennie_88]

helloo~~~ im finally back again TTTTTTTTTT!!
thank you so much for always writing such amazing detailed comments, i love ur comments and appreciate all the time you take to read/comment <3 <3 <3
sorry it took soo long for me to reply and update *cry*
i dno if i can keep the plot going well cuz i just dont want to be stuck anymore and just forced myself to write XDD haha i hope its okay~~
also not sure if i should include a jaejoong pov at some time or just stay with min~ :S
anyway, the story continues as it will hehe~ thank u again <3 <3 :D

[museelo]

loving this ;3;
i srsly wan't wait for an update omg you write so well i can't ;_;
thank you for sharing this fic!! :D

[rennie_88]

hello~ :) i'm so sorry my reply is soooo late~ TT and update sooo late too huhu sorry to keep you waiting, but i hope you enjoy the next part too :)
thank you for reading and commenting <3 you're too sweet ! :)

[blake_anita]

Oh, that's cool! Forgive me, my written English is terrible and I can not write a great review of your fic, but I want to say that I will be looking forward to continue. I loved the first 5 chapters. Thank you for writing this!

[rennie_88]

:) thank you very much for reading my story and leaving your thoughts and commenting <3 i really appreciate it~~
the next chapter is updated now finally ~~ T^T; thank you again <3 ;)