FIC: Maybe Definitely, YanaKiri, NC17, 7/7

Nov 23, 2010 16:03

Title: Maybe Definitely (7/7)
Author: Ociwen
Wordcount: 39 000
Rating: NC17 overall
Disclaimer: Everything you can possibly think of, and then some. Spoilers for 40.5 and the entire series, including ShinTenipuri.
Warning: Girl parts, and then some. Crude humour. Misogyny. The usual.
Summary: Renji wakes up as a girl.
Author's Notes: This is a one- ( Read more... )

yanakiri, denouverse, tenipuri

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mayezinha November 23 2010, 23:26:27 UTC
And now it's over!! ;____;
But it's good we didn't got through the hate mail and more angsty things. Things will look up for them. Evenm when Renji isn't the best housewife.
I hate how you make me love this pair every single time you write them. Becaue it's never enough. XD;;
But aside any gender and baby issues, you still put that even when they're not the best of friends, they're a team.

A lovely story, Alliosn, thanks for sharing it.

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reposoir December 8 2010, 22:07:53 UTC
You know, Maye, you should get a gold star. Because you are one of the few readers who actually left comments, and finished reading and had the courtesy to share your thoughts. And I really, truly appreciated reading your comments (you know that, right?), especially when they're one of few little things that can make a person's day.

So I wanted to say thanks. ♥

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mayezinha December 8 2010, 22:23:53 UTC
There are times when I fail with my reading (and you know it), so I try to do the best I can.
And there are stories I'd love to never end. This is one of those.

That doesn't mean I didn't liked the others!
Just that there are times when I'm able to leave a proper feedback and it's better when everything is fresh, because I proved that I fail posting with my notes. ^^;;

You're welcome. <3

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ezri_sun November 24 2010, 01:04:32 UTC
Lovely ending. Its the really cute moments at the end that really get me. So there is no disappointment there. Some of my favourites include ( ... )

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reposoir December 8 2010, 22:09:58 UTC
Thank you so very much for your comment on this fic! I really appreciate reading your thoughts. This fic, well, it would just be too depressing to have anything but a happy ending.

And that you 'got' Yukimura being an ass about surgery recovery times. Eheh.

Ah, until you mentioned Inui, he completely slipped my mind. Next time, I promise. He'll pop up.

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venivincere November 24 2010, 01:36:51 UTC
Woo hoo! Last part posted! I will be reading the rest this weekend as soon as I'm done with my two fest fics, which I was kindly offered extensions on. :-D

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willowscry November 25 2010, 01:10:37 UTC
This was great, as are all the other stories in this little universe of yours.

I must say, I rather enjoyed that little part where Renji goes and visits Niou. Niou really needed that bit of support.

As for Renji, I'm glad he survived childbirth, and you can tell how Akaya is maturing now that he's a father. I love how they're trying to hold on to what they have left of their "childhood" though.

I know Renji's mother is just trying to be helpful, but I think she does need to step back a bit and let Renji make his own mistakes in parenting (but I think he'll be fine).

I'm just a bit relieved that this wasn't as heartbreaking as the last one. And I'm sorry, I can't bring myself to comment on individual parts. I like knowing how the whole story fits together before I say anything. :)

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reposoir December 8 2010, 22:14:42 UTC
Thank you so very, very much! I really appreciated that you took the time to leave a comment after you finished reading. ♥

The Renji and Niou part kind of wrote itself and came out of nowhere. Niou needed to be cut a break, poor guy.

lol, the stuff with Renji's mother actually stems from Japanese pregnancy websites I was trolling (research) and apparently they have some strange ideas about pregnancy and babies. So it was added both as a humour element, and to reinforce the fact Renji is a teenage know-it-all at times. ;)

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anonymous December 5 2010, 21:48:38 UTC
Funny and great as the usual and with a lovely ending :)) thanks so much again for sharing! -tanja

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reposoir December 11 2010, 21:52:16 UTC
Thank YOU so much for the lovely comment! ^^

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