Comments | respicefinem08: Cold (Viewfinder song ficlet)

respicefinem08

Cold (Viewfinder song ficlet)

Dec 06, 2007 18:35

“I’m sorry,” his whisper fell, literally, onto deaf ears.

Looking back at me I see
That I never really got it right

And did it matter to the stone whether there was a man before him or not, paying tribute to the skeleton beneath it? Not to the stone, perhaps, but to the man that knelt, it mattered. To the skeleton beneath...even to the ( Read more... )

cold

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sueona December 6 2007, 17:59:28 UTC

Wow, is all I can say. This is such a wonderful peace and the song lyrics fit so well with this story. I think it can go to both Asami and Akihito, but how I read it, I would think more on Asami than Akihito. Great work. Love it.

respicefinem08 December 7 2007, 09:23:07 UTC

Thank you. This is the first time I'm writing something that actually fits in one post, so i was quite nervous

starawings December 6 2007, 19:06:11 UTC

*bites her lip to keep from crying* this is so sad. the song is wonderful and is perfect for asami and aki.
You did a wonderful job on writing this story, please keep up the good work.

respicefinem08 December 7 2007, 09:23:52 UTC

*hands her a tissue* it's okay, it's okay to cry

thank you! your encouragements keep me writing!

darkyaoiangel December 7 2007, 02:54:03 UTC

I'd always wanted to write a VF fic to this song but it seems you've beat me to it. :P LoL.

Great fic. Very moving. I loved your metaphors.

ICON LUV TO THE EXTREME!

respicefinem08 December 7 2007, 09:27:03 UTC

Yeah, I've been putting off writing a VF fic to "Cold" for a really really really long time, too actually.

*I don't get the ICON LUV TO THE EXTREME!* elaborate? :)

darkyaoiangel December 7 2007, 18:29:30 UTC

I love your icon. Matt Damon. Love of my life.

respicefinem08 December 7 2007, 19:08:21 UTC

i know, he's such a hottie

*especially in the bourne trilogy*
*and in the ocean's trilogy*
*and in good will hunting, the departed, and a much much more haha*

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catka13 December 7 2007, 13:40:15 UTC

thank you. really thank you

respicefinem08 December 7 2007, 19:10:13 UTC

*blush* giggles uncontrollably

sakura27 December 7 2007, 18:59:59 UTC

Damn you, I want to cry now. *sniff*
This is so sad. And sweet at the same time.

And *very* well written.
Thank you very very much!

respicefinem08 December 7 2007, 19:13:23 UTC

*hands her my pink, embroidered hankerchief* it's okay to cry..let it all out *somehow, I just had the vision of big boob Bob from fight club when he shoves Norton's face into his chest * faceplams* oh god...