Vengeance

[respicefinem08]

            “Fuck…” Takaba groaned, slapping the white wall behind him, head tilted back, biting his lower lip. Sweat matted his hair down, plastered it against his forehead. He thought he might split, might break, God, it had been a hell of a long time.

He felt Sergei slow and place a warm hand on Takaba’s trembling stomach, “Am I…

Comments

[secrettenshi]

3 word I Loved It ;) you always wride such good storys and its always fun to read your stuff really! :) i hoped you came back whit a story about vf and well this part was great!

i hope your exams and finals will go the way you want them :)
keep it up!!!

[respicefinem08]

Thank you! I had (and still do) some misgivings about posting such an abrupt ending. You give me a peace of mind here, really.

I really appreciate the support, and a happy new year!

[sakuradespair]

This was excellent. =3 Don't sell yourself short. Granted, I had also forgotten the details, but that's not what matters, is it? Now it's time to go back and reread all of it~~

Good luck at exams. ^__^

[respicefinem08]

Aww...you ease my guilt here a bit...

Thanks for reading! (my exams went well btw)

[catka13]

thank you for hot happy ending :)
I´m looking forward to your next story

[respicefinem08]

Ah, we'll see... we'll see

but thanks for reading!

[anonymous]

I was captivated by this story even though one of the major characters was absent throughout I thought it was so well written and so thought out that you basically had no choice but to latch on and enjoy this story. I have to say I am disappointed by the ending, it is very abrupt and it just feels incomplete to me, that being said I do look forward to your future stories and hope for an ending that is on par with its beginnings. I hope you don't take offense cause I truly love your writing, I just had to be honest, in the same way you read a great novel and then are left unfulfilled with the ending, I just imagine every reader has felt this before but of course that has never stopped them from reading. Once again thanks for the great story

[ayune01]

i wish it was more. But i've to say. You are among the best writer i ever read.
Thank you for finishing this one.

Wishing the best in your research paper and exams.
*_*

[respicefinem08]

You *must* be my number 1 fan haha. I might have mentioned this before but I'm surprised people from the VF community still even know my fics exist haha