Fic: Castle on a Cloud

Sep 13, 2015 15:24

Title: Castle on a Cloud
Author: reve_silencieux
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Sara, Neal (Neal/Sara)
Spoilers: S6 Finale
Word Count: 5,018
Beta: sherylyn and sapphire2309
Summary: Sara gave up on her childhood dreams a long time ago. They just weren't meant to be. Or so she thought.
Author's Note: I finally wrote post finale fic! Took me long enough. Thanks to both sapphire2309 and sherylyn who ( Read more... )

character: neal, character: sara, neal/sara, white collar, wc fic

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sandy79 September 13 2015, 22:14:52 UTC
God, that story is beautiful! I actually have tears in my eyes, since it's heartbreaking in the first and then absolutely wonderful in the second part. Love that Neal wants to be there for his kid, and the gift he sends Sara is just downright adorable. Beautiful story, BRAVA!!!

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reve_silencieux September 15 2015, 18:46:40 UTC
Thank you! Believe it or not, when I first started this fic, it was just about Sara, needing to vent about life. Then... well, it went someplace I hadn't planned. :D I remembered Elr's headcanon, and before I knew it, I had post finale fic. I really wanted to address the fact that Sara needed to know - for good or bad - and he's so close!! Despite everything he did to protect everyone, I don't think he would leave Sara alone in that situation. And of course I like happy endings. ;-)

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ultracape September 13 2015, 23:50:09 UTC
I've been crying from the moment I started reading the story. It's lovely, heart breaking and heart warming.

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reve_silencieux September 15 2015, 18:49:58 UTC
Awwww... Thank you! *hands over tissues* I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it made you cry!

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ladyrose42 September 14 2015, 00:41:35 UTC
Ahh. Baby fedora. Making a new start. Enjoyed it.

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reve_silencieux September 15 2015, 18:55:28 UTC
Hee! Yes, I couldn't resist. I found this, which I originally had used, then tweaked: http://www.beltoutlet.com/girls-zebra-print-band-fedora-hat.html

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

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mywhitecollar September 14 2015, 02:07:00 UTC
Just beautiful. I always told myself that if they ended the series that Sara needed to come back pregnant or with a dark headed blue eyed baby. So you can only imagine how excited I was to find your story!!

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reve_silencieux September 15 2015, 18:59:33 UTC
Yes! I had wanted to write that plotline for awhile, and I had so many ideas in my head, with so many ways it could go. Then I after awhile I realized this Sara fic I had started could incorporate it, and voila! Angst was born. I have more in my head for this fic, and hopefully I can write it one day.

Anyways... glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

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aragarna September 14 2015, 18:29:30 UTC
This was a very great story. Love the way you depict Sara's feelings. Great job!

(And now I'm gonna kill you cause I have pirouette cacahuète in my head...)

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reve_silencieux September 15 2015, 19:02:03 UTC
Heee! You're the one who came up with the song in the first place!! Besides, if you kill me, you won't get more fic!

Thank you! I'm pretty sure I told you how it started, and it was supposed to be short! HA! We know my muse...

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