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New CCS Fanfic

Apr 06, 2008 23:27

I'm a newbie to LiveJournal and I have no idea what I'm doing. BUT I heard LJ is a good place to advocate fanfics so please read and preferably critique it.

Title: Intruder
Author: globmonster1
Rating: T
Chapter(s): 2 (recently added on 4/6/08)
Pairings: None; SxS to come
Genre: Angst/Romance
Summary: There's a saying that says life isn't fair. Sakura ( Read more... )

Comments 7

rebmastu April 7 2008, 19:08:39 UTC

Honestly, it's very, very OOC. Personally, I wouldn't even call this a Sakura fic. (Also, you threw a "tou-san" somewhere in there. Consistency is also important, of course.)

kainasilverbane April 7 2008, 23:43:27 UTC

Wow, you were a lot more lenient than I expected.

*Twirls her own personal sheers with a sick lil grin* My turn

bananaspit April 7 2008, 23:57:30 UTC

Meh. I'm here for reviews, not compliments. xD

kainasilverbane April 8 2008, 00:34:20 UTC

Okay, first I'll start with pointing out the user info, when you get there, you'll scroll down and you'll find a submission format. You got most of it right just by the seat of your pants, but here's what it'll look like when you pull it from the user info page;

Title:
Author/Penname:
Rating:
Chapters: (also indicate if complete or in progress)
Pairings: (optional)
Summary:
Warning, Notes: (optional)
Link to story/story behind lj-cut
Disclaimer:Fill it all out, and if there is something different about your fic, stick it in the Warning/Notes! Obviously, yours was a bit... different...and I'm going to get to that in a minute, but make sure you fill all of those little pockets out. If you need examples, scroll down the community front page and back a few, there are tons ( ... )

bananaspit April 8 2008, 01:18:11 UTC

Yeah I know. Maajor OOC.

FYI, I DID watch the whole anime, two times in fact. I DO know what happens. I admit, I got way too ahead with the whole death and angst thing though but I read enough of the fanfics to know how cliqued the fandom could be. I appreciate your advice though but I have no doubt in my knowledge of CCS.

sheila_chan April 9 2008, 05:55:45 UTC

If it's not too much to ask, can you please add your story text (the story per se) in this post and put it behind an lj-cut? As much as possible I want discussions to be within the community threads and I can no longer access ffnet properly these days (and some people I know in the community have been avoiding it like the plagueXD); it also makes reviewing easy. :)