my will, your way

Mar 25, 2009 16:08

Title: My Will, Your Way
Prompt: un_love_you- I want you to hate me.
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Jack/Kate
Word Count: 346
Rating: PG-13
Table: Here.
Spoilers: Post-island flash forward type things.
Summary: Kate sticks with Jack through and through despite his demeanor.
Notes: 3/30.

later and later )

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_almostparadise March 25 2009, 21:49:12 UTC
This is awesome, bb!

And he laid down on the covers, himself an unguarded man. He ripped the tie off that in his mind was choking him. He fiddled with the buttons on the top of his shirt, frustrated, until Kate took over.
^ I loved this.

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revoked March 25 2009, 23:16:46 UTC
aww thanks! <3

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hintofawhisper March 25 2009, 23:57:56 UTC
Wow. I think this one is my favorite so far.

I'd always wondered how long Jack stayed with Kate until his descent into alcoholism and drug addiction became too much, which led to their separation. I feel like there are so many things we still haven't seen of them off the island.

That being said, this scenario is something I can actually see on the show. It's so unbelievably sad, but it has to be when dealing with that premise.

"How could I?" She asked as the tears welled. "How could I hate you? You saved me, Jack. Don't deny that."
His fists clench and his voice shook. The alcohol on his breath wafted out, filling the air with angst.
"You fucking saved yourself."

That part really stuck out to me. I just... I don't really know what to say. It's just that good. XD

The ending was beautiful, also. Great job! :D

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revoked March 26 2009, 00:11:51 UTC
Thank you so much :] It really means a lot, hearing feedback! I've always wondered the same thing.
thanks again <3

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hintofawhisper March 26 2009, 00:50:09 UTC
You're very welcome. Us fic writers thrive on feedback. ;D

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