Passing Time {3/6}

[rhamni]

Title: Passing Time {3/6}
Pairing: HaeHyuk (Donghae/Hyukjae)
Rating: PG-13, later chapters R
Genre: AU, Angst, Romance
Word Count: 2833
Summary: There was something about Hyukjae that was different- charming to a degree- though Donghae wasn't sure what exactly made him that way.
Note: Boop beep. \0/ Okay, so some of you guys seemed really concerned about

Comments

SPOT!

[kikiiovesmusic]

This means I'm first right? :D

Re: SPOT!

[kikiiovesmusic]

Three weeks had passed from their first date and it had been two weeks since they had officially begun dating. Donghae wasn't afraid to admit that he was absolutely smitten with the other- he had been in previously relationships before, but none where they had hit it off so well right off the bat.
-Sooooo the beginning of the chapter is just SOOOOO CUUUUTE. Being so quickly in love must be really hard for him to accept, especially since he has lived such a controlled life, but it's GREAT <3

Hyukjae sounded sheepish and Donghae could picture him rubbing the back of his head, “With texts you never know who you're talking to. Anyone could send a text. And I don't like leaving messages. I just like hearing your voice.”
Donghae felt a flush rise to his face, “I like hearing your voice too,” he whispered, glaring at Sungmin when he heard incredulous bouts of laughter rise from the other man, “I'll call you later, okay, Hyukkie?” -*diiieeessss* Can I keep Hyukkie? Please? And Donghae? Because this part is just unbelievably blissful

Re: SPOT!

[kikiiovesmusic]

“You should really quit smoking,” Donghae advised his boyfriend of six months.... Donghae pursed his lips as he watched Hyukjae lay down colors on canvas. There was still an area in the corner where Donghae could see pencil sketches, but other than that the painting was already bursting with color, as if Hyukjae was painting with his energy rather than simple, store-bought paints.... “Hyukjae, you did not!” Donghae's eyes widened. “You quit smoking?”
A smug grin told Donghae everything, and he jumped off the couch to fling his arms around Hyukjae's waist, showering his face with light kisses.... -Gah this whole section was just freakin beautiful. I LOVED your descriptions of Donghae's admiration and Hyukjae's concentration~ I could just picture it so easy, and what I saw was just so darn lovely I wanted to hold it. Sadly I cannot -_- but my admiration for this fic has heightened so much more.. ahh and Hyukkie has quit smoking!! Wahhh that made me so happy!! I totally felt Donghae's happpiness lol and I wanted to happily kiss him

Re: SPOT!

[rhamni]

ohemgee you're so cute~ n_n <3 I'm on a campus computer right now, and I'm sure everyone in the room is staring at me because I've been smiling like crazy for a few minutes. xD
I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I really loved reading your comments~~ Not pointless at all, it helps me know what people like to read.
Kyaaaahhh thank you for taking the time to comment~ It must've taken you awhile~ Next chapter is more in Hyukjae's perspective and should hopefully be uploaded later this week~ <3

[ialwayswill]

omg i'm dying to know what's up with hyukjae :o

[rhamni]

Next chapter it is semi-explained, haha. n_n~
Thank you for reading and commenting!

[yulia_eru]

Oh my God, what's up with Hyukjae?

[rhamni]

You'll find out next chapter~ :D
Thank you very much for reading and commenting!!

HI

[steeel_magnolia]

Well. I would really like to get into hyukjae's mind and read his thoughts:S
Why is he so skittish and paranoid?
I hope he doesn't turn out to be a psycho, that would be devastating; ;
pleasedontlethyukbecrazypleasedontlethyukbecrazy
or worse, a murderer. Gasps.
I shall stop speculating and wait for your next update.
While chewing on my nails. ~(;_;)~

Re: HI

[rhamni]

Next chapter will be more in Hyukjae's perspective~ All will be revealed then, haha~ ^^
Thank you for reading and commenting! :D <3

[jazzy4heard]

awwwww.. the fluffffff..
I guess Hyukjae loves Donghae too, judging from him quitting smoking and see..... visions..
but what are these visions? why so tense? Im excited waiting for the next chapter, too!!

[rhamni]

I hope you liked the fluff~ ^^
I'm really excited for the next chapter, so hopefully it'll be up within the week! Thank you for reading and commenting!