Passing Time {3/6}

[rhamni]

Title: Passing Time {3/6}
Pairing: HaeHyuk (Donghae/Hyukjae)
Rating: PG-13, later chapters R
Genre: AU, Angst, Romance
Word Count: 2833
Summary: There was something about Hyukjae that was different- charming to a degree- though Donghae wasn't sure what exactly made him that way.
Note: Boop beep. \0/ Okay, so some of you guys seemed really concerned about

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[yuue04]

AND YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I WANNA SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER TOO
OWH I SEE THEIR RELATIONSHIP HAS ESCALATED KEKEKEKEKE
AND WHY THEY ARE SO SWEET TOGETHER???KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I WANNA BE THE PAIR OF SIBLINGS THAT SAW THEM *POUTS* I WOULD HAVE RECORD THEM MAKING OUT AND UPLOAD ON YOUTUBE KEKEKE
ALWAYS BEEN CURIOUS WHO IS HYUKJAE...IS HE SOME KIND OF SON OF A RICH MAN WHO HAS BEEN THROW OUT OF FAMILY??
MAFIA RELATED???DON'T TELL ME HE IS CURSED OR SOMETHING *I AM ABSURD I KNOW*
THIS IS SUPER INTERESTING!!!!

[speceffectz]

sooo good<3 your writing is so awesome!

[brattygurl2011]

I love the way Hyuk thinks. How he criticized the snake for being lazy then wondering if he's being hypocritical because humans get their food already dead too. While I think his thinking is cute and funny, is there something different with Hyuk psychologically? I mean his paranoia about someone hurting Hae, is that real or is it something that he's imagined? He couldnt explain to Hae who "they" are and he's been losing weight and not eating.

I think they are good together, but they haven't known each other long so there's probably a lot about Hyuk that Hae has yet to discover. Like why Hyuk decided to go to Hae's school when according to Sungmin Hyuk is talented enough to go somewhere more prestigious. There seems to be these little mysteries about Hyuk. Either that or I've been reading too much angst or suspense that I'm taking all of this too seriously.

[roka_maluv]

omg what's wrong with hyukjae ??
this is really good ;A;
please keep writing <3

[hxcangel92]

I love how their relationship progressed...and how Hyuk quit smoking! :'))
But, I wonder why Hyuk is worried O_o
/patiently waits for next~
<<<333