Another great chapter, as usual (see icon ^.^)... God, this fic is epically awesome. And thanks for the quick updates lately!!
I'm glad that we're seeing Brian's side of things lately- I've been so focused on Justin's recovery, I'd nearly forgotten that Brian is just as broken as he was, and just handling it differently (as, I'm sure, other readers have as well!). I hope Justin's closer to a place where he can help him and be there for him...
Thank you. I've been so focused on Justin's recovery, I'd nearly forgotten that Brian is just as broken as he was, and just handling it differently (as, I'm sure, other readers have as well! Yes, you may be right and that's exactly how I've planned it because somebody else has forgotten that too. But that's Brian, and the difficulty of writing him. Things with Brian, his emotions, his fears, his love, it all usually has to build to a crescendo before it bursts out of him and then slowly falls to begin a swaying tide of emotion until something else makes him guard himself again.
Justin isn't exactly anywhere, think back to canon and try to parallel what you can and how he deals, or rather you'll just understand it more in the next chapter and the following ones.
Its good to see Brian's POV on things. I did cry during this chapter,it was a tough read. I hope very much that Brian is able to communicate with Justin his feelings right now. A great chapter ~ Yvonne xx
Great Chapter! This story really plays with your heart strings.Good to see Brian's thoughts.The last part almost killed me,but in a good way.Can't wait for your next update
and you once again left me speechless. believe it or not it took me so long to read this, I had to take breaks in between when I couldn't take it and had to put my phone away for few minutes (I read it the first and only time from my blackberry around 7:00 AM, nice way to start the day) and not really I don't think Kleenex is necessary... more like buckets for my tears and strait-jacket so I don't throw my phone away.
you have no idea how thankful I am that you didn't post the next chapter like right after, I believe I couldn't have read it even if I wanted to.
I am sooooooo glad you are taking this story in the way I myself do. I can't thank you enough for sharing that with me. I'm afraid the next one is going to be another intense chapter. I think perhaps it may climax all through the final one, on one level or another. Thanks so much for reading and giving your feedback
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I hope Brian be honest to Justin about what he feels and not hold it all in.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Lynn
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I'm glad that we're seeing Brian's side of things lately- I've been so focused on Justin's recovery, I'd nearly forgotten that Brian is just as broken as he was, and just handling it differently (as, I'm sure, other readers have as well!). I hope Justin's closer to a place where he can help him and be there for him...
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
-Cae
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I've been so focused on Justin's recovery, I'd nearly forgotten that Brian is just as broken as he was, and just handling it differently (as, I'm sure, other readers have as well! Yes, you may be right and that's exactly how I've planned it because somebody else has forgotten that too.
But that's Brian, and the difficulty of writing him. Things with Brian, his emotions, his fears, his love, it all usually has to build to a crescendo before it bursts out of him and then slowly falls to begin a swaying tide of emotion until something else makes him guard himself again.
Justin isn't exactly anywhere, think back to canon and try to parallel what you can and how he deals, or rather you'll just understand it more in the next chapter and the following ones.
New chapter will be posted later tonight.
Rory
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believe it or not it took me so long to read this, I had to take breaks in between when I couldn't take it and had to put my phone away for few minutes (I read it the first and only time from my blackberry around 7:00 AM, nice way to start the day) and not really I don't think Kleenex is necessary... more like buckets for my tears and strait-jacket so I don't throw my phone away.
you have no idea how thankful I am that you didn't post the next chapter like right after, I believe I couldn't have read it even if I wanted to.
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Maholy.
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I'm afraid the next one is going to be another intense chapter. I think perhaps it may climax all through the final one, on one level or another.
Thanks so much for reading and giving your feedback
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