Comments | riflethrough: fic: mixed with bad advice

riflethrough

fic: mixed with bad advice

Sep 09, 2009 09:44

So, uh. This happened.

Mixed with Bad Advice
Wizards of Waverly Place. Alex/Justin. 1,528 words.
Warnings: incest, underage
Notes: Thanks so much to pirateygoodness for the beta help! Set after the WOWP movie.

( The competition to keep their magic had always seemed like this far off thing, something that was going to happen, but not to her, maybe, and now it’s all she can think about these days. )

wizards of waverly place, fic

Comments 26

pearl_o September 9 2009, 14:40:31 UTC

Oh, gosh, this is lovely and intense. I love how there's so many different emotions all weaved together through it, all the tension never quite breaking. And the voices made me really happy.

riflethrough September 9 2009, 17:42:01 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! Oh man, I was a little worried about the voices, so that in particular is awesome to hear. :D

annakovsky September 10 2009, 03:26:17 UTC

Oh man, I really love this -- you deal so well with the aftermath, and how weird it'd be, and it's so fantastically awful and tense.

riflethrough September 10 2009, 12:41:11 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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riflethrough September 10 2009, 12:44:07 UTC

:D :D :D!

liztaya September 10 2009, 10:46:52 UTC

I really liked this! The whole idea of the wizard competetion just makes me sad, and I think you deal with the aftermath of it and the tension between them really well.

riflethrough September 10 2009, 12:46:11 UTC

Thanks! And that was pretty much all I could think about after the movie--the aftermath, and how it couldn't be that easy to go back to normal. Anyway, I'm glad you liked. :)

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riflethrough September 11 2009, 02:40:46 UTC

Oh, thank you! This comment seriously made me smile. I'm glad you liked it. :)