[Fic] Moments of Grace (for Lechaco) - part 2 of 2

[giving_ground]

[please read part one first]

Comments

[yuki_scorpio]

Fucking hell OMG.

Best thing you've written. Well, of the ones I've read anyway.

[giving_ground]

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*flails at omg*

You have no idea just how much this comment means to me. ;; Thank you.

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[yuki_scorpio]

Seriously.

I fail at commenting, but when you post this up on your own comm I'll try to write a longer comment!

[yukimura]

...
I think this was one of the most touching ffs I have ever read.

It takes a lot for a ff to make me cry.
And yet I was sitting here and crying my eyes out.

[giving_ground]

Oh, thank you so much! Seriously, I'm glad to have written something that had an impact on you. :)

[dshae47]

Loved your Yanagi, loved your Sanada. And... I think I need to applaud your insight, because your development of your Yukimura's feelings was extremely believable and thought-provoking. Now I feel like I should come back to it and reread it as a sort of walkthrough to my life, orz.

Also, I'm seconding what crystalusagi said about the tone.

I'm very glad I read this. :)

[giving_ground]

Thank you! ♥ I'm glad it felt believable. ...I think this story should probably only be used as a How Not To guide, though. *facepalms* XD;;

[dshae47]

You're very welcome :).

And... Yes, well... Maybe if I had read this a few years ago XD. BUT. FAILING HARD ENOUGH HAS ITS CHARM TOO! That's why fic get written about this sort of thing, right? Right? XD;

[giving_ground]

Yes, well... I think a lot of us have been there, right? orz

[kedi_kedi]

Wow what an awesome fic! And NiouYuki!! *flaps* ^U^

Veeerry bittersweet...it was extremely painful in parts and really beautiful in others, dare I even say the NiouYuki bits were beautiful >D. Yukimura is a very complicated person, caught in a very ugly situation. I didn't think he could be so torn apart but well...you've managed to pull it off very excitingly! XD I couldn't stop reading because I HAD to know if Yukimura was going to resolve things with Sanada, and if Niou would make him see sense.

Ooooooh the pain was sweet, and despite all that they got a happy ending, so all is well!

Great stuff!

[giving_ground]

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, I'm all flustered and happy. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[aiwritingfic]

Oooh. *wibble* I don't know what to say, have nothing to say, but have wibbling. *wibbles*

[giving_ground]

Hope that's good wibbling! XD;;;; Thanks for reading~