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[riku_aura777]

Title: No Longer Listening
Author: riku_aura777
Pairing: Jalex
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Sadly, I don't own them.
Summary: Four instances where Jack and Alex almost kiss and one where they finally do.
Notes: Just something new :)

Comments

[singbackxlouder]

I like this, it's very cute :)
Even though I'm not familiar with who's who in All Time Low, I kept going "Arrrg damn it!!" at the end of each section when they didn't kiss. lol

[riku_aura777]

Aww, thanks for commenting even though you're not familiar with them. Alex is the singer/guitarist of the band and Jack plays guitar (writing this story was so odd, mainly because my name's Alex so it was just strange). If you're interested, I can send you a video/interview of them so you can put faces to the names (well, from what you said, I'm just assuming you don't know. Please correct me if I'm wrong).

And oh my god, over at the All Time Low comm, I have lurker fans! It's so weird but so very awesome!

Okay, going to answer your other comments now.

[singbackxlouder]

You're welcome!! :) Hahaa, that must've been weird, I can totally see what you're saying. Well hello, Alex, I'm Naz :)

Oh yeah, that would be great! You're totally right, I have no idea who to imagine when I read this :)

Aww, well that's awesome, good for you!

[riku_aura777]

You know, I think it's totally weird that we have not properly introduced ourselves in the few months we've been talking to each other XD Just saying. Anyway, Naz is a pretty awesome name; just wondering, is it short for anything or is it just Naz? Like, I am an Alexandra, but I definitely want to cut the 'andra' part out

[ronaze]

Awww! I loved this! I think my heart broke a little every time they didn't kiss, it's so beautifully written. But the last part made me dance. And they're so obviously gay for each other in real life.

One thing though, shouldn't “If you do, don’t dump my body the ocean, okay?” be “If you do, don’t dump my body in the ocean, okay?”

[riku_aura777]

Awww, thanks so much. Haha, since I just woke up, I was so confused, because I didn't know you commented it in my journal, so I checked the community, and I was like, "Wait... I know I have one more comment, where is it?" XD And agreed, they're totally gay for each other.

Oops, my bad. I have a habit of doing that, thanks for pointing it out. I'll correct it eventually. Thanks! :)

[firehigher]

I have no real idea who All Time Low are, though I have heard of them, but I still wanted to read this because I'll generally read anything if I know the author's good =]
Also, I love the whole 'four times *something happened* and one time it didn't' premise and was looking for some the other day and now I've seen this, so yay!

I loved the sleeping in the same bunk bit. Though it freaks me out waking to see someone watching me sleep, I don't know how Jack kept his cool quite so easily. And the last bit too, with the suggestion that they're gonna hook-up for real, finally.
It was well written and flowed nicely. I've read some awesome fic recently, which is nice because I hadn't read any for about a year until the begining of this year, so it's still a treat to read things like this.
I'm going to go google their faces now, so I can see what they really look like!

[riku_aura777]

Well, it makes me happy that I have friends that will read my writing, even if they're unfamiliar with the band :) Really, thanks, it means a lot. I've always liked that premise too, but it was the first time really using it, so I'm glad that you liked it.

That seems to be everyone's favorite part. It's mine too, actually. And wow, it's good to know that the decade is looking good for new fics.

Well... hope you consider them visually pleasing! :D