Being (Hawaii Five-0 drabble)

Oct 05, 2010 15:49

Written for the Parenthood prompt at hawaii_5_0_100He left New Jersey on a Thursday and landed in Honolulu on Friday, somehow having lost a day amidst the lights of Las Vegas and the hours of hurtling through the darkened skies between the east coast, the west coast, and the blank expanses of the ocean beyond it ( Read more... )

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lillyg October 6 2010, 09:34:20 UTC
Awww! That was sweet! ^^

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rina9294 October 6 2010, 19:13:07 UTC
Thanks, I just love the relationship Danny and Grace have on the show!

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mneme2434 October 6 2010, 09:39:02 UTC
That was great and I definitely loved the ending!

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rina9294 October 6 2010, 19:14:10 UTC
Thanks so much!

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anuminis October 6 2010, 14:59:20 UTC
awwwwwww~ Danno is an awesome dad I would really like to know the reason for their divorce.

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rina9294 October 6 2010, 19:15:02 UTC
Yes he is and me too - I have my own plotty reasons, but I'm curious as to what the canon is.

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lady_wyn October 6 2010, 21:13:48 UTC
So sweet! I really love the detail of the story--that is, how you showed his transition (losing a day, the one bedroom apartment, the button-up shirt, etc). Great last line, as well. :)

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rina9294 October 6 2010, 21:32:49 UTC
Thanks so much! I had to laugh because I found myself looking up information on flights between Newark and Honolulu so I could get that part right. The things you do for fic... ;)

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lady_wyn October 6 2010, 22:00:42 UTC
Kudos to you for caring enough to look up a detail for a drabble. :) I applaud your dedication!

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kitmerlot1213 October 14 2010, 15:25:32 UTC
This was just lovely! I love watching Danno's obvious love for Grace and the fect that he would do anything for her.

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rina9294 October 14 2010, 20:32:04 UTC
Thank you so much :) That's one of my favorite parts of the show as well, it adds heart in the midle of all the action which gives it a great dimension.

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