Dear LORD Rindee. You have the sense to leave it there. This constant open-ended stuff makes me think you like the idea of writing more in this 'verse.
Now that I've said that, you've managed to make this whole situation so believable that I wish it had happened like this.
Aaron being a creepy bastard is nothing new, but having Veronica watch it happen and then still want to be with Logan made my shipping heart so very happy.
There was something so simple about that beach scene and how it lead to them at the hotel that I can't help but find really charming and sweet. Their nervous reactions to the night before they got busy were also endearing and felt like something that both of them would have done.
But, then all of that lead up to some really heartfelt and honest sex between these two. It wasn't perfect, but it was something that they can both remember. As to the morning after, I adore that Veronica wanted to have another go round with him.
If I bat my eyes really well, can I see one more in this series?
Um.... You don't have to bat your eyes, Roz, I think there's a little more to be written. *wink, wink* And, you're right, to an absolutely ridiculous degree, I am loving writing in this 'verse, partly because Lilly's still alive, and kicking ass too. LOL.
I'm glad the romance/sex felt both real and true to character - I was trying to depict a time when both Veronica and Logan were a little less jaded, a little less sophisticated. As for the next morning - if you woke up with Logan, don't you think you'd give him a second "go round"? Hee!
Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know what you thought, what you liked. I love reading your comments, and always look forward to them. *hugs*
Oh, I'm so pleased you continued this universe. I like the way that you brought L&V together and the way you bring them to the hotel room worked for me, as well. And of course, the smut is sweet and hot all combined. I will say that during the attack, I was thinking that there is no way that Veronica can hide this from Keith, as I would think the bruises around her neck might give away something, so I am interested to see where this might go later on. And now that Lilly knows... and I want to know why Duncan broke up with Veronica -- if it's the sister reason, the attention reason, or if he had his own suspicions -- so that means you must continue. Yes? Please?
I have to admit, I'm having a lot of fun writing it, so much so that each time I finish, I want to write more. So, yeah, I think there's a little more story left to tell - especially now that you've left me a laundry list of "issues" to be develed into and developed. Wheee!
Thanks so much for the kind words and encouragement. It means so much to be appreciated.
The sex scene is sweet, romantic and believable. Logan comes across as mischievous, sinful and kind all at once, which I enjoy.
But, my favorite part was Aaron's interaction with Veronica and Logan. It has an authentic feel to it. The subtle way he blames Logan for the abuse, the double speak, the lies, the narcissism! You wrote that well, woman. Very well.
I can't wait to see how you handle Veronica's reaction to Aaron. The way you write her, I can't imagine she'll leave the situation alone.
Awww, thank you, darlin'. I'm delighted you liked the sex, but I think my favorite part is Walgreen's, for which you were the inspiration, so thanks for that, too. *wink*
I confess I'm absurdly proud of the scene w/ Aaron, creepy as it is. It felt familiar - and right - when I was writing it. Made me wish I'd had some mace when I was 16. I'm excited about Veronica's going to do next, because you're right, she's not going to be able to leave it alone.
Thanks for reading, beta'ing, commenting, and listening, too. You're the amazing one.
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Now that I've said that, you've managed to make this whole situation so believable that I wish it had happened like this.
Aaron being a creepy bastard is nothing new, but having Veronica watch it happen and then still want to be with Logan made my shipping heart so very happy.
There was something so simple about that beach scene and how it lead to them at the hotel that I can't help but find really charming and sweet. Their nervous reactions to the night before they got busy were also endearing and felt like something that both of them would have done.
But, then all of that lead up to some really heartfelt and honest sex between these two. It wasn't perfect, but it was something that they can both remember. As to the morning after, I adore that Veronica wanted to have another go round with him.
If I bat my eyes really well, can I see one more in this series?
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I'm glad the romance/sex felt both real and true to character - I was trying to depict a time when both Veronica and Logan were a little less jaded, a little less sophisticated. As for the next morning - if you woke up with Logan, don't you think you'd give him a second "go round"? Hee!
Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know what you thought, what you liked. I love reading your comments, and always look forward to them. *hugs*
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*unable to form coherant or articulate thoughts at the moment*
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Thanks so much for the kind words and encouragement. It means so much to be appreciated.
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*stares at you expectantly*
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Okay, you can stop staring now. LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting. Makes me so happy! ;D
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But, my favorite part was Aaron's interaction with Veronica and Logan. It has an authentic feel to it. The subtle way he blames Logan for the abuse, the double speak, the lies, the narcissism! You wrote that well, woman. Very well.
I can't wait to see how you handle Veronica's reaction to Aaron. The way you write her, I can't imagine she'll leave the situation alone.
As always, you're amazing.
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I confess I'm absurdly proud of the scene w/ Aaron, creepy as it is. It felt familiar - and right - when I was writing it. Made me wish I'd had some mace when I was 16. I'm excited about Veronica's going to do next, because you're right, she's not going to be able to leave it alone.
Thanks for reading, beta'ing, commenting, and listening, too. You're the amazing one.
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