Comments | rindee: The End of Innocence, part 2 - L/V - NC-17

rindee

The End of Innocence, part 2 - L/V - NC-17 - rindee

Jun 23, 2007 14:58

Title: The End of Innocence, part 2 ( Read more... )

vm_library, logan/veronica, vm_library challenge, lilly

Comments 40

p2880 June 24 2007, 04:59:05 UTC

Unbelievably good! AU from the beginning but your extrapolations of their characters are so real as to be true. Thanks!

rindee June 27 2007, 22:31:18 UTC

Oh, wow! Thank you so much. *blushes* I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and thrilled you found the characterization to be true.

la623 June 24 2007, 20:42:08 UTC

Oh man! I loved this! DAMN! This was a lovely fic to read for my bday. I'll just pretend you wrote it just for me! :)

This was seriously hot...WOW..lol...and the way you ended it! Geez! I love that Lilly was so accepting of it! I hope there's a sequel!

rindee June 27 2007, 22:37:26 UTC

Hiya, hon! Happy Belated Birthday! I'm sorry I'm so behind in Lj that I missed it. Please consider it your B-day fic - I would have dedicated it to you if I'd realized. *hugs you*

I'm delighted you thought it was a little hot - they stopped and started so often I thought they'd never get down to business! LOL As for Lilly - and the ending - I suspect there's more to it, so don't be surprised if there's a sequel.

la623 June 28 2007, 02:28:54 UTC

Thank you! *hugs* YAY! I'll gladly accept this and thank you! It's a wonderful present! :) No worries...better late than never! I celebrate my bday for 3 weeks... my sister's is 7/15 so I get to celebrate till then...so technically you didn't miss it! :)

LOL...but see, the whole tease of the story and them starting and stopping totally added to the hotness!

I'll be absolutely delighted to see a sequel to this! :) Thank you again!

ziebra June 25 2007, 09:01:31 UTC

first thoughts: AWESOME ENDING..... oh, and HOT.... more later

rindee June 27 2007, 22:38:56 UTC

I like your first thoughts! Thank you - for reading and leaving such delish fb.

Pleeeease! anonymous June 25 2007, 12:56:34 UTC

Don't leave it there! This was awesome, Veronica all innocent and him getting nervous with all his experience... really funny... great fic. Loved Lilly.

Re: Pleeeease! rindee June 27 2007, 22:41:47 UTC

I love Lilly, too!!! In fact, she's one of the reasons I keep writing in this 'verse. She's too fun, no? And you thought it was funny - Yay! I so rarely manage funny, so it makes me so proud and happy when you say that. Thanks for the lovely comment.

havemy_heart June 25 2007, 16:05:10 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad to see more of this. It was extremely realistic and completely delicious. Logan is too awesome and so romantic, with scattering the rose petals on the bed and trying to make Veronica's first time everything it should be. Everyone should be so lucky.

The part with Aaron was suitably creepy. I hate to think what's in store for Logan once he goes home. At least he knows he has Veronica on his side now.

Lilly knows about them now! Very interesting. It didn't seem like she was upset or anything. I wonder what exactly she's going to say to Logan Please write more very soon since this is so nice and open ended ;-)

♥

rindee June 27 2007, 23:09:13 UTC

Wheee! I'm so happy you liked it. It was such a kick to write a happier, sweet and romantic Logan - you're right, everyone should be so lucky.

I think things are going to get very interesting when the lovers go home to their respective houses and parents - but that's not going to happen until Lilly's had her say - LOL.

Thanks for leaving me such wonderful feedback.