I loved this. What a perfect first time for them. Logan was so sweet! That was really hot, but really intimate as well. I can't believe you eneded it there?!
If fic is chocolate this one is Godiva, rich, delicious and so naughty, Rindy. ;)
I can't get enough, it's the best and I just love this series to a ridiculous degree, and I love in this part there is more fun settings, like the descriptions in the walgreen's, and the cat eye glasses cashier looking at Logan like he's a pervert and the whole bit with his little angel and demon voices, which I swear must be canon. And I totally was giggling over Logan's dilemma over what lubes and condoms to get, and how it ended. But also I just loved that he knows that he's done this sex stuff a lot, but with Veronica he's worried and nervous, because he wants it to be good for her, and I find that so sweet.
And the sex! God lord woman. It's not perfect, hehe I loved the awkwardness with the condom, but damn is it hot. Especially the second time! And so true to real life too, haha.
Shuddering uncontrollably, she comes in his arms, surprise and shock registering in her sapphire eyes. Curling over her, he comes moments later, and falls to her
( ... )
Naughty? Moi??? I don't know what you're talking about - bwahaha!!!
I'm so tickled you love this so much - I do too, and I don't really know why. I'm just having a blast writing it, and it's way too much fun.
The angels are courtesy of moire2 - it started out as joke, but it made too much sense to leave it alone, so I have to give her credit for the brilliant idea. It seemed so Logan-like - he's such a dictomy.
As for the sex - I worked hard at making it not perfect, because, really, the first time rarely is.... Ahem. I'm glad you thought it was hot, though....
And you giggled!!! Yay! I'm so pleased. I don't often write funny, so it's gratifying to know it worked.
I think Lilly is one of the main reasons I love this 'verse so much. As you know, she's so effin' fun to write - in all her many shades and levels of complexity. Let me assure you, the rest of the phone call is coming w/ the sequel.
Thanks for all the love, hon. Btw: did you catch the shout-out? *wink*
I love so many things about this part...fidgety Veronica, unable to settle down because she knows what's...ahem, coming... Logan in the pharmacy trying to pick out lube, er, *massage* oil is just hilarious, and even the little sing-song exchanges when he gets back to the room, and then goes to get ice, etc, are hammy and perfect.
I love Logan's premature ejaculation--such a realistic thing for a fifteen-sixteen year old boy to do. So many of even the best writers forget that just because JD's 24-ish, he's *supposed* to be 17-18-19, and by definition, a complete tool (in the sack. Um, no pun intended.)
This part is so delightfully sexy, it just sent a shiver right down my spine: Crying out, she bucks into his hand. Nudging her onto her back, he covers her body with his, dragging his fingers through her creamy folds, holding her close as she humps his hand, thrashing and groaning. Once, twice, she jerks hard against him, biting his neck as she comes. Surprised at herself, her eyes flutter open. Chest heaving, she stares into his
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Mmm - so glad you liked this, dear, but - hammy???? *squints* Hammy???? Hmpf! I'll have you know I worked hard on that part. Hee.
And, yeah, the premature thing was part of my homage to realistic teenage sex - although Logan's not a complete tool, he is human, and only 15 here, so he's not quite as sophisticated and in control as he becomes in a year or so. That's my story, and I'm sticking to it. Ummhmm. *nods*
And isn't Lilly the best!!! I love her so much - she's so deliciously nosy, bossy, bitchy, and funny. I've totally fallen in love with writing her - and it's all your fault, dear!
Srsly, though, thanks for all the love and hand-holding and patience and all that jazz. *mmwah*
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Great job, totally saving this to memories!
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I can't get enough, it's the best and I just love this series to a ridiculous degree, and I love in this part there is more fun settings, like the descriptions in the walgreen's, and the cat eye glasses cashier looking at Logan like he's a pervert and the whole bit with his little angel and demon voices, which I swear must be canon. And I totally was giggling over Logan's dilemma over what lubes and condoms to get, and how it ended. But also I just loved that he knows that he's done this sex stuff a lot, but with Veronica he's worried and nervous, because he wants it to be good for her, and I find that so sweet.
And the sex! God lord woman. It's not perfect, hehe I loved the awkwardness with the condom, but damn is it hot. Especially the second time! And so true to real life too, haha.
Shuddering uncontrollably, she comes in his arms, surprise and shock registering in her sapphire eyes. Curling over her, he comes moments later, and falls to her ( ... )
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I'm so tickled you love this so much - I do too, and I don't really know why. I'm just having a blast writing it, and it's way too much fun.
The angels are courtesy of moire2 - it started out as joke, but it made too much sense to leave it alone, so I have to give her credit for the brilliant idea. It seemed so Logan-like - he's such a dictomy.
As for the sex - I worked hard at making it not perfect, because, really, the first time rarely is.... Ahem. I'm glad you thought it was hot, though....
And you giggled!!! Yay! I'm so pleased. I don't often write funny, so it's gratifying to know it worked.
I think Lilly is one of the main reasons I love this 'verse so much. As you know, she's so effin' fun to write - in all her many shades and levels of complexity. Let me assure you, the rest of the phone call is coming w/ the sequel.
Thanks for all the love, hon. Btw: did you catch the shout-out? *wink*
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I love Logan's premature ejaculation--such a realistic thing for a fifteen-sixteen year old boy to do. So many of even the best writers forget that just because JD's 24-ish, he's *supposed* to be 17-18-19, and by definition, a complete tool (in the sack. Um, no pun intended.)
This part is so delightfully sexy, it just sent a shiver right down my spine: Crying out, she bucks into his hand. Nudging her onto her back, he covers her body with his, dragging his fingers through her creamy folds, holding her close as she humps his hand, thrashing and groaning. Once, twice, she jerks hard against him, biting his neck as she comes. Surprised at herself, her eyes flutter open. Chest heaving, she stares into his ( ... )
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And, yeah, the premature thing was part of my homage to realistic teenage sex - although Logan's not a complete tool, he is human, and only 15 here, so he's not quite as sophisticated and in control as he becomes in a year or so. That's my story, and I'm sticking to it. Ummhmm. *nods*
And isn't Lilly the best!!! I love her so much - she's so deliciously nosy, bossy, bitchy, and funny. I've totally fallen in love with writing her - and it's all your fault, dear!
Srsly, though, thanks for all the love and hand-holding and patience and all that jazz. *mmwah*
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